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Open Poetry #24

You Think?

Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

0 posted 2002-12-20 03:36 AM

With ease,
Do you think?
Breaking while faking
Between lines written
for you?

Each pause,
Long or short
An act of bravery
Unrewarded
Unrecognized.

A peace offering
Maybe more for me
Than you
For I'm still
in the broil of
Aching need
Long after your
Departure

With Ease,
Do you think?

Think Again.

Sunkissed.

[This message has been edited by Sunkissed (12-20-2002 03:36 AM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2002-12-20 03:54 AM

very sad, I felt the emotion, pain of being apart...others sometimes think things that aren't near truth at all, so we gotta remind them again, huh?

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-12-20 04:40 AM

(big hugggsssssss) This is so sadly heartfelt, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and hope now you have unraveled this truth as we all seem obligated in living a lie at first! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-12-20 10:38 AM

I think...

I understand.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2002-12-20 10:43 AM

I think...this one is well done...
and I too think

I undertand

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

5 posted 2002-12-20 12:06 PM

Sunkissed,

I think you did a great job with this. Sure didn't mince any words. And, it is perfectly clear and the ache comes through loudly, no matter the fake.

Hugs and love to you, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

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