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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2003-02-07 08:45 AM



I once knew love~
a leg stretched out over mine
our feet intertwined
I once knew love~
was looking at the stars
with firelight
in our eyes


BloomingRose

[This message has been edited by BloomingRose (02-07-2003 12:07 PM).]

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-02-07 08:48 AM


BloomingRose
And you willl know it again, enjoyed.


Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2003-02-07 10:17 AM


I like this... and do hope you find it again..
garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-02-07 10:20 AM


Debra, I also hope you find that kind of love again.....
SmartChick
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4 posted 2003-02-07 10:42 AM


I once knew this kind of love, too. This is beautifully written.
Toerag
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5 posted 2003-02-07 11:53 AM


Do ya wanna know love again?...Let me introduce myself.....interesting write sweetie.....
BloomingRose
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6 posted 2003-02-07 12:55 PM


Though painful to lose love, I have to say it was worth it.
Thank you all for your loving replies.

Hugs,
Deb

Midnitesun
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Gaia
7 posted 2003-02-07 02:10 PM


Oh, how I do understand this one, Deb.
Hope that you do know that feeling again.

Bill Charles
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8 posted 2003-02-07 02:46 PM


BloomingRose - from reading your writings, and also seeing your photo, I believe there will be many happy days ahead/ My best to you...

BC

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9 posted 2003-02-07 02:51 PM


As "they" say, "It is better to have known love and lost it, than to have never loved at all!" I believe that may be true. Sounds like you have definitely known what love is all about.

Warm hugs,
EA

BluesSerenade
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10 posted 2003-02-07 11:40 PM


What a nice poem BloomingRose~ (edit, edit)
loved the reference to firelight~

it says so much!

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (02-08-2003 01:23 AM).]

carol
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11 posted 2003-02-07 11:42 PM


BloomingRose, i loved this but sure is sad
BluesSerenade
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12 posted 2003-02-07 11:46 PM


aaaaaaaaaaaaack, I realize I called you by the wrong name 'BloomingRose' but I am not seeing my reply yet....oh where is that edit button when I need it!  sheeeeeeeeeesh!

(sorry about that)

vlraynes
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13 posted 2003-02-07 11:47 PM



This is beautiful, Deb.
You've got me remembering.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Gentle Spirit
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14 posted 2003-02-07 11:53 PM


bittersweet memories for me Deb....I once knew this love....sigh....it tugs, and I can feel every word of this.
JamesMichael
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15 posted 2003-02-08 02:51 AM


Keep trying so you can say you know a new love...James
passing shadows
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16 posted 2003-02-09 03:29 AM


I remember that
BloomingRose
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17 posted 2003-02-09 04:20 PM


Thank you~
Warm hugs from me to all of you!
Deb

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