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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2003-02-07 07:31 AM


It fills the whole sky
With whiteness that’s floating down,
It fills all my eye
Covering all which was ground;
Plows come by pushing,
But recovers soon as gone,
It stills the rushing
With the people staying home
While whiteness comes floating down.

Gloom


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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2003-02-07 08:27 AM


Professor,
I like the write, but white is a double
symbol. It can mean purity or death, enjoyed.

Nan
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2 posted 2003-02-07 08:32 AM


It has its merits, PG...No school today.. I'm puddlin....
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2003-02-07 09:00 AM


Cool to Cheek Melting

When the softness has covered
and I'm outside bound
the cool to cheek melting
brings memories found
of the mindprints of yesterdays,
the footprints of past,
the world in its white
of night to days last.

As the world slows its busy
all home snug and warm.
it is I that is out there
in padded of form,
making angels in snowground
and men out of white...
I love the soft flakes
and their touch, my delight...


wish you were here...
a snowball fight would be fun...although I have been told I have poor aim and throw like a girl

M

garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-02-07 09:06 AM


(loving Maureen's reply...a snowball fight does sound like fun, doesn't it? But, I'd probably throw like a girl, too....)    

Seriously, maybe the snow covered ground will be gone soon and you will see the pretty green grass, with all the beautiful flowers and trees.....  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-07-2003 09:08 AM).]

Brad Majors
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Georgia
5 posted 2003-02-07 11:18 AM


I really liked this
BloomingRose
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6 posted 2003-02-07 12:34 PM


Living in Florida no snow for me, but it sure is gloomy.
nothing but gray skies
Guess it could be worse. I could be pushing a shovel/rake!

Deb

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
7 posted 2003-02-08 01:19 AM



Gloom~
Love the picture you've painted.
Nicely done.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

GG
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Lost in thought
8 posted 2003-02-08 01:25 AM


we haven't had snow here... and I wanted some. But now I don't need it, 'cause you just showed me some thanks!

(though I'd still like to be out of school)

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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