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Too Much White
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Too Much White |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
It fills the whole sky With whiteness that’s floating down, It fills all my eye Covering all which was ground; Plows come by pushing, But recovers soon as gone, It stills the rushing With the people staying home While whiteness comes floating down. Gloom |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Professor, I like the write, but white is a double symbol. It can mean purity or death, enjoyed. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
It has its merits, PG...No school today.. I'm puddlin....  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Cool to Cheek Melting When the softness has covered and I'm outside bound the cool to cheek melting brings memories found of the mindprints of yesterdays, the footprints of past, the world in its white of night to days last. As the world slows its busy all home snug and warm. it is I that is out there in padded of form, making angels in snowground and men out of white... I love the soft flakes and their touch, my delight... wish you were here... a snowball fight would be fun...although I have been told I have poor aim and throw like a girl  M |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
(loving Maureen's reply...a snowball fight does sound like fun, doesn't it? But, I'd probably throw like a girl, too....)  Seriously, maybe the snow covered ground will be gone soon and you will see the pretty green grass, with all the beautiful flowers and trees.....  "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-07-2003 09:08 AM).] |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
I really liked this |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Living in Florida no snow for me, but it sure is gloomy. nothing but gray skies Guess it could be worse.  I could be pushing a shovel/rake!Deb |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Gloom~ Love the picture you've painted. Nicely done. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
we haven't had snow here... and I wanted some. But now I don't need it, 'cause you just showed me some thanks!(though I'd still like to be out of school) Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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