Open Poetry #24 |
Reflections of time |
Peter J Marcroft Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 265York, England |
Reflections of Time By Peter J Marcroft Across the eons, and through the mists of time I have travelled, A nameless, ageless warrior from far beyond the past, And throughout my journey I have forever pondered, Can the race called man forever last? A dissatisified species, addicted to the thrills and chaos of war, Joyous at the sight of dead babies and slaved land, Always more bloodshed, inexplicable, what are they fighting for? To an entity like me, it is a sight, that makes you so saddened I Journey to the future, what lies beyond? Will the image shift?A dawn of creation? No, the image is still the same, one man who plays god Over the human enemy that belong to another nation I am an outsider and my time here is over, Humans are so intelligent that they are fools, They scramble at everything, like a child after a four leaf clover, Treating their coveted goods as valuable as jewels I cannot interfere, that is not my call, All I can do is to mutate and evolve With this race, and climb life's wall, Forever hoping, the path of war shall resolve. [This message has been edited by Peter J Marcroft (02-07-2003 07:13 PM).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Perhaps such a time traveler could impart some of that reflection into a species in need of wisdom.. Interesting write, PJM... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Peter, Enjoyed the flight and the write. |
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Peter J Marcroft Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 265York, England |
I am glad that you all appreciated this piece, thanks for reading, it was this piece that won me my first poetry competition about two years ago (only some minor college thing but still..) Anyway yeah thanks again. |
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Dr Pepper Freak Member
since 2003-01-30
Posts 72CA |
"I cannot interfere, that is no my call, All I can do is to mutate and evolve With this race, and climb life's wall, Forever hoping, the path of war shall resolve." My favorite verse (though I believe in the first line of this the 'no' should be 'not') Beautiful and well written! Great job! It's not the load that breaks you down, it's the way you carry it. ~ Lena Horne |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Please interfere. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Welcome to Passions, Peter! Anyone who is familiar with my poetry, would know how much I enjoyed this piece. Wonderful on so many levels! I look forward to reading more of your work! Love, Light & Laughter, Earth Angel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nicely done |
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Peter J Marcroft Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 265York, England |
I am so pleased that many of you are impressed with this, I am also thankful to the person who pointed out the mistake in the final verse. I hope that I am able to write more soon |
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