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Black Swan Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165on the moon 
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poor it on thick oozing sinful sweetness oozing desire for the weak hearted bitter sweet temptation falls over me Iam stuck too far gone situation most sticky smothers my soul drowns my thought level-headedness corrupted my heart pulls hard on me my body wants more sweet warmth passifies blurs my judgement all i can see is softeness all i can hear is my own happiness trapped comfortably muffled dont talk to me! you know your smile kills me. dont touch me! you know i love it. |
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Sun of faith Member
since 2003-01-31
Posts 101 |
Very intence, i have been in that situation, i know how you feel, and you have portrayed that feeling very well in this poem. Nice write! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Powerful and moving. Eric |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Black Swan~ This is quite a powerful piece. I enjoyed the read. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It's like saying, no no no, more more more. Enjoyed your candid thoughts Black Swan~ Welcome to the blue pages by the way! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
isnt it wonderful? |
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Black Swan Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165on the moon |
frightingly and horribly wonderful :P |
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