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Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2003-02-06 11:49 PM

My Girl
(A Candy Heart Poem)
By: Noah Eaton
2/2/01

My girl,
Oh, the way you shimmer
The way you spin and twirl
Oh, the way your hair waves and your eyes glimmer

My girl, my dream
Oh, the beauty of your words
Buzzes around me like a small cloud of honeybees
Oh, the sweetest words I have ever heard

My girl, my love
Oh, the sweetness of your smile
Your soft silky hair spreading the light from above
Watching you sway with the wind, out in my heavens meadow

My girl
My one true love is you
My girl
Your love sighs within my heart, sweet and true

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-02-06 11:50 PM

Beautiful as usual

Cold hands means a warm heart

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

2 posted 2003-02-07 12:01 PM

You are a hopeless romantic......ain't it great?

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garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-02-07 12:05 PM

Another beautiful one, Noah.....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

4 posted 2003-02-07 12:39 PM

noah,

this poem is only as beautiful as your
heart. i loved this so much and the images
were beautiful as well. take care my friend.
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2003-02-07 12:46 PM

Enjoyed...very nicely done...James

Black Swan
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 165
on the moon

6 posted 2003-02-07 01:24 AM

u are truly in love with love

Talia

Dr Pepper Freak
Member

since 2003-01-30

Posts 72
CA

7 posted 2003-02-07 09:55 AM

Noah, words can not express the beauty of this. Your heart has expressed itself beyond imgination. Loved this a lot!

It's not the load that breaks you down, it's the way you carry it. ~ Lena Horne

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

8 posted 2003-02-07 11:25 AM

If "all the great romantics are dead", where does that leave you, Noah? Let's just say, they missed on that on, as you are simply, and completely drenched in the art!

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2003-02-07 06:39 PM

nice

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

10 posted 2003-02-07 06:54 PM

Noah - pictures and words that define romance - lovely and so well done - Paul

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

11 posted 2003-02-07 07:57 PM

You've done it again Noah!! Just lovely. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

12 posted 2003-02-07 10:00 PM

This is my favorite of yours...among the many I love.
Eric

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