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jytree
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since 2000-01-26

Posts 336
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0 posted 2002-12-20 01:48 AM

It starts with a kiss,
And ends with a goodbye,
What am I speaking about you ask,
It is the kind of love that has to die,

Why did I get my heart broke into?,
Why did you give up and say we are through?,
Why do you have such a cold crule heart?,
But was it that fact that drove us apart,

A broken heart is all I have to hold,
And that makes you smile if it were solid gold,
Why did I suffer for what I belived?,
Why did you injoy watching me bleed,

I see the fact you have no heart,
I only see it now that we are apart,
So now while angels carry me with there wings,
I fade from you like a passing dream.

jytree
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since 2000-01-26

Posts 336
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1 posted 2002-12-20 01:50 AM

I hope this don't offend anybody I was just explaining the last relatationship break up in creative words and about the angels I don't die in it they are taking me to a place of healing with God almighty

Local Parasite

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since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

2 posted 2002-12-20 01:53 AM

JYTREE! It's been ages, man! Haven't seen you since like, Teen Poetry #4...

Thought you enlisted to serve? Or are you on your break? Hm?

Great to see you back...

Too bad you have to come back on a note of heartbreak. I do like your positive spin on it, but it's still a sad situation. It's okay, you're a tough guy, you'll pull through... and your faith can help you, as well.

Great to see you back... hope you stick around for a long time, this time.

Parasite/Allan Riverwood?/whatever

It's amazing the effect ice can have on the world.
~Allysa

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2002-12-20 03:19 AM

the kind of love that has to die....

sounds like an affair with a married lover...I know it well...

jytree
Member

since 2000-01-26

Posts 336
omaha ark usa

4 posted 2002-12-20 01:43 PM

no I didn't enlist or anythings just been letting life slap me around for far too laong know and no it wasn't her cheating on me My ex-wife did that only after three weeks of marriage but I am back and with Gods help I will keep writing

Greeneyes617
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since 2000-11-22

Posts 329
Arkansas

5 posted 2002-12-20 03:39 PM

That's my boy! Jay, ya know I love you to death. You have always been there for me. Thank you. I love this poem. Its about time you started writing again. *MUAH* Write more.. lol..
Malinda
P.S. Doesn't love just suck sometimes???

jytree
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since 2000-01-26

Posts 336
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6 posted 2002-12-21 02:23 AM

thank you malinda like always you are there

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