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Aimster
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0 posted 2003-02-06 11:44 PM


This is a chance I'm taking, revealing my deepest feelings to you
When I'm with you though, I feel as though my dreams are coming true
I can't seem to contain the joy that I feel deep inside my soul
When you wrap your arms around me I feel completely whole

This is like a love I've never known, maybe never will again
You are both my lover and most cherished friend
I thought I found love, I thought it would last until my days were through
But it didn't...because the person I was with, wasn't you

I know we both are scared, and that this will take time
I'm just glad to know you truly are mine
Please just give me a chance, it will be worth the risk, this is a promise true
What I'm trying to say is...I honestly do love you

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

© Copyright 2003 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-06 11:49 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

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2 posted 2003-02-06 11:51 PM


Amy, she better be good to you! you deserve all the happiness in the world This is so sweet........
Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2003-02-06 11:53 PM




(sigh) Oh Amy, I too hope she reads this too, you are so deserving of true love and I know you will find it just by believing! (kiss on cheek) Here's angel hugs of hope for you, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2003-02-07 11:39 AM


Very nice, Amy. It's good to see your smile again!  
Brad Majors
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5 posted 2003-02-07 11:43 AM


Aww so beautiful!
BloomingRose
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6 posted 2003-02-07 12:14 PM


Romantic wishes are blooming!
Well done.

Deb

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7 posted 2003-02-07 12:17 PM


A pretty poem for Valentine's Day.
I enjoyed it....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Dark Angel
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8 posted 2003-02-07 02:59 PM


Miss Amyyyyyy:

how are you hon? it has been a long time. Ya gotta stop changing emails on me. lol.

This is a lovely write indeed, and I agree.. it is a lovely poem for Valentines Day.

Nice to see you again. Hope you stay.
have missed ya.

Maree

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9 posted 2003-02-07 03:31 PM


These warming words of love could melt an iceberg at the North Pole!

Valentine hugs,
Earth Angel

nakdthoughts
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10 posted 2003-02-07 03:35 PM


very sweet and sincere words...
I hope you always have the love you wish for.
hugs
M

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11 posted 2003-02-07 04:13 PM


touching write
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