Open Poetry #24 |
Chance |
Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
This is a chance I'm taking, revealing my deepest feelings to you When I'm with you though, I feel as though my dreams are coming true I can't seem to contain the joy that I feel deep inside my soul When you wrap your arms around me I feel completely whole This is like a love I've never known, maybe never will again You are both my lover and most cherished friend I thought I found love, I thought it would last until my days were through But it didn't...because the person I was with, wasn't you I know we both are scared, and that this will take time I'm just glad to know you truly are mine Please just give me a chance, it will be worth the risk, this is a promise true What I'm trying to say is...I honestly do love you "love is like a butterfly-- |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Amy, she better be good to you! you deserve all the happiness in the world This is so sweet........ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Amy, I too hope she reads this too, you are so deserving of true love and I know you will find it just by believing! (kiss on cheek) Here's angel hugs of hope for you, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Very nice, Amy. It's good to see your smile again! |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Aww so beautiful! |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Romantic wishes are blooming! Well done. Deb |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
A pretty poem for Valentine's Day. I enjoyed it.... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Miss Amyyyyyy: how are you hon? it has been a long time. Ya gotta stop changing emails on me. lol. This is a lovely write indeed, and I agree.. it is a lovely poem for Valentines Day. Nice to see you again. Hope you stay. have missed ya. Maree |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
These warming words of love could melt an iceberg at the North Pole! Valentine hugs, Earth Angel |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very sweet and sincere words... I hope you always have the love you wish for. hugs M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
touching write |
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