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Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2002-12-20 01:47 AM

An acoustical apparition
wings lightly past my ears and eyes.
Downy dark feathers float by on
frolicking notes on a warm summer breeze,
swirling and twirling my heart
through the wispy willow trees
that line the northern shores of
Forevermore.

Listen to the bewitching tune
of the magical midnite loon,
as he serenades his love throughout the night,
capriciously capturing hearts and minds along the way.
My eager ears crave the loon's song by day,
anxiously await his glorious midnight melody.
Sonnets and sonatas, ethereal bonnets
cover my head in delicious dreams
of mystical madness,
lifting my spirits gently,
soaring my sights to heights
beyond my most primal screams.

Come listen with me to liquid love,
let the eternal magnetic love affair
between the loon and midnite's moon
carry your heart over the midnite mists.
Hear my heartsong,
as it sings
in tune with the loon,
Forevermore.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2002-12-20 02:03 AM

Enjoyed your soaring thoughts and the peaceful scenery you depict at midnite.

Makes me want to go there~

Nice writing Kacy~

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

2 posted 2002-12-20 02:39 AM

This was, well......pretty

Very!

Ed

christian
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since 2002-12-18

Posts 331

3 posted 2002-12-20 02:52 AM

depicts something pretty. i love your
words too, almost exotic. good job.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2002-12-20 03:16 AM

me being a midnighter, I love this write...

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-12-20 05:15 AM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, now it is 3:15 but I always hear my sweet Joannas dove sigh every time! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

6 posted 2002-12-20 05:19 AM

something mystical in these words with wings--enjoyed!!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

7 posted 2002-12-20 07:25 AM

Kacy, The flow is tremendous in this, it just keeps going, flawlessly.

I especially like this. Re-reading a must. Love it!

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

8 posted 2002-12-20 07:27 AM

yes, mystical, celestial,like an outerbody
experience, like a drugfree trip, beautiful

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

9 posted 2002-12-20 10:26 PM

Thanking each one of you for reading my loon(yes loon not looney) tunes.
I hope to post another one soon, and include music and photo. I'm afraid I've lost me cheat sheet that explained how to add music and photo both.
Oh well, hopefully the words will continue to conjure up an acceptable image.
But you've really gotta HEAR these creatures someday.

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