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To Forget My Name
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To Forget My Name |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
I wish to fall asleep With your name Hanging from My lips – And to wake within an instant When my own name is Forgotten. And the dawn holds only you. |
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abbe Member
since 2003-01-20
Posts 131michigan, usa |
ah, shoot! this is too special. you got me right in my sentimental heart. great |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
To lose oneself so totally in Divine Love that one's own name does not matter... and it should not matter... for truly, all that is is Love... Thank you... incredibly beautiful song of love. Love, Moca |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very nice Eric... Much enjoyed this romantic thought. ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Eric, this is lovely, sweet friend, I too yearn so uch to have my lovers name revealed so I can sleep with the font engraved on my white dreams! (big hugggsssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Eric, This is precious. Enjoyed greatly. Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I do believe you just made forgetting your name impossible. At least, for us poet readers...  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I must say humbly, I came away with a treasure. WEll done. TD |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Absolutely beautiful Eric. Take care....Sue I am in motion |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
...now this is romantic |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I think Pat described this best as precious I love it Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
I really like this |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Eric, this is so pretty..and it really is precious.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Nice! |
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pjtalty Member
since 2002-07-17
Posts 111W.A., Australia |
I wouldn't be surprised if Ralph Waldo Emerson had a poem such as this in mind when he wrote in the preface to *Parnassus* (1875): "Poetry teaches the enormous force of a few words, and, in proportion to the inspiration, checks loquacity." Need I say more? Well done! Patrick Talty |
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Dr Pepper Freak Member
since 2003-01-30
Posts 72CA |
Truly beautiful! It's not the load that breaks you down, it's the way you carry it. ~ Lena Horne |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
beautiful thought..nicely presented. I enjoyed |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Magical! Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful...short and very powerful |
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shannon harter Junior Member
since 2003-02-03
Posts 31waesaw,IN USA |
even after years of reading poetry, and writig myself, it still shocks me into silence how some people can say so much,in so few words. loved it. your awesome! shannon |
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