Open Poetry #24 |
Beneath The Willow |
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
“BENEATH THE WILLOW” by Bill Charles ~~~~ I sat beneath the willow as it wept tears of joy that kissed the lazy stream as it swam on by… Memories are of your desires when we made love under its boughs for the first time on an early summer day… The sun warmed the grass on the bank of the stream as it captured tender sighs, and it carried them gently through the meadow. I remember that special summer day, beneath the willow… ~~~~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely Bill..and how much I love the willow.. Very romantic write! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Yes Bill, you've got it all, meadow, soft green grass, willow and water and a great memory....enjoyed! Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Bill, this is lovely, sweet friend, this made me smile as all your love poetry never ceases to do! (big hugggsssssss) I especially love when they flower in the spring, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Special times and places combine to make memories...well done Bill.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you Bill... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A very special memory, Bill. Hold onto that one, it may carry you through to warmer days. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Some stay sweetly and nearby for always... Pretty piece. ThisDiamond |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Bet ya didn't know I loved Willow trees? This was beautiful writing Bill... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BillCharles~ I REALLY like this thought - 'I sat beneath the willow as it wept tears of joy that kissed the lazy stream as it swam on by…' Good to see you friend~ How's that Arizona life treating you ? *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
....oooh roll on summer...now i really wish it would hurry up...loving your words as ever bill. lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Now, how in the world did I miss this beautiful poem???? I always look for yours, too, Bill....sorry.. I guess I really did get behind during the time I haven't been feeling very well... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sweet, soft, surreal, and soooo sensuous.... I remember a time such as this and it brings a smile to my soul...thanks for the memories Valentine hugs and cinnamon hearts, EA |
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Landings New Member
since 2003-02-11
Posts 7 |
Wow, that is incredible |
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