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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-02-06 07:14 PM


He Plays My Song

there was
no more
room for
the silence
so I
turned him
up loud
caressing sounds
Jim Brickman
only plays
for me

"It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly."


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with you
1 posted 2003-02-06 07:16 PM


sadly, I don't know his music...
but relate to the feelings well

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2 posted 2003-02-06 07:17 PM


turn up the volume..and drown out the inner silence..

nice


Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2003-02-06 07:21 PM


Very very nice Helen!
Turn it up louder.
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

GG
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4 posted 2003-02-06 08:11 PM


this is sweet and special

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

scorpio
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right...there
5 posted 2003-02-06 08:19 PM


there was
no more
room for
the silence
so I
turned him
up loud

and the music exists for only you at that moment...I enjoyed this..

believe in what your heart feels...

Ericc
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6 posted 2003-02-06 09:44 PM


Very beautiful.
Eric

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7 posted 2003-02-07 08:27 PM


I can relate Helen, it's kinda like when I'm alone and I'm watching Yanni...I know the feeling.....
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