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Comprehension 101
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Comprehension 101 |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Comprehension 101 can you read me in the bold clear printed lines and in the ones in between do you roll my vowels is there a long I in the sound of sigh my heart beats in the rhythm of the verse I live words and I am the poem and there is a possibility something is missing "It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Helen, you ARE poetry. You always make it look so easy and natural to open up the soul and let the words of the heart flow down the page. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
entry level classes are often seem the hardest... when the subject is new. enjoyed this my friend.. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"my heart beats in the rhythm of the verse I live words and I am the poem" absolutely loved this  |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Again...beautiful. Eric |
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