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Mistletoe Angel
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Love Me Tender
(A Candy Heart Poem)
By: Noah Eaton
2/17/02



Love me tender
Kiss me between these white silk sheets
In your meadow is where I'll render
I want to feel your every heartbeat

Destiny will be our jongleur
You are my joie de vivre
You are all my heart desires
You melt my heart in your lovingly gaze



Your lips sing like an orioles
You are my sweet buttercup
As doth heavens bells toll
I will always hold you close to my heart, my love

Love me tender
Kiss me with your cherry lips so sweet
I want to hold you forever
Make sweet love to me...














"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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1 posted 2003-02-06 06:43 PM


enjoyed
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2 posted 2003-02-06 06:47 PM


I'll be honest... I'm not a fan of love poems.

But this was so sweet and tender how does someone not like it? I wish my boyfriend would write something like this about me.

Thanks. I needed to read something on a lighter note (today has been a bad day for the bp lady).

- Jaime

Shiva went on break now look at how much it's gonna take to make this place a space where we can breathe.

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3 posted 2003-02-06 06:48 PM


all men should be this romantic
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4 posted 2003-02-06 06:53 PM


Yes...I agree with SEA!
ALL men should be this romantic and oh so soft sopken.
Lovely Noah.
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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5 posted 2003-02-06 07:05 PM


I wish Liam was this romantic. Beautiful Noah

Cold hands means a warm heart

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6 posted 2003-02-06 07:06 PM


Very nice Noah.

My Boyfriend is sweet and romantic.

Andrea

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