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Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2003-02-06 10:27 AM

          I fall to the heat
          of your gaze -
          A Shiva's touch
          that strips me past the bone.

          I am nothing now.

          Yet somehow...more than I ever was.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-02-06 11:55 AM

How beautiful, Eric. I enjoyed reading...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-02-06 12:20 PM

very nicely done, flowed well, short and sweet

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2003-02-06 12:23 PM

quote:
The great German poet Rainer Marie Rilke says it for us: "Be patient toward all that is unsolved in your heart and try to love the questions themselves. Do not now seek the answers which cannot be given you because you would not be able to live them. And the point is to live everything."

{Courtesy, goodgrief.org}

Grief...
is growth.

Poetry...
is your soul.

Thank you Eric. You do a lot of good, here amidst our blue walls....

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-02-06 01:51 PM

...Thank you for this...
~Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

5 posted 2003-02-06 02:02 PM

really enjoyed this!

Black Swan
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 165
on the moon

6 posted 2003-02-06 04:26 PM

its short,yet it says so much

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2003-02-06 04:37 PM

(smiles) Oh Eric, this is lovely, sweet friend, so succinct yet you always seem to bring a hearth of warmth to your words! (big hugggsssssss) I love your brevity too, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-06-2003 04:38 PM).]

cinnamongirl
Member

since 2003-02-02

Posts 217

8 posted 2003-02-06 04:45 PM

Aaaaaahhh... stripping away the layers to find the true beauty that is the real you...

...and more than you ever were.

Beautiful. I love this...

Love,
Moca

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

9 posted 2003-02-06 10:55 PM

I really like the way you write

carol
Senior Member

since 2003-01-25

Posts 624
Florida USA

10 posted 2003-02-06 11:31 PM

Eric,I really enjoyed this it is sweet

[This message has been edited by carol (02-06-2003 11:31 PM).]

we'llfloat
New Member

since 2003-01-23

Posts 2

11 posted 2003-02-06 11:36 PM

truly beautiful...

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