Open Poetry #24 |
Worship (Valentine For No One) |
Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Solemn vows in eyes lock oaths whispered on nape of neck The slow descent to bended knee to speak in tongues devine Hands braced upon the altar as lips press to chalice to drink of sweetest wine In worship of you |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I really like this a lot Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
No one...now I'm no one.....humph.... kidding...but really wowsers! this rocks! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The slow descent to bended knee to speak in tongues devine. That's love for ya! Nice take on the ritual Raph~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well, there goes my mind in the gutter again...sorry...very passionate writing! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
for no one oh, cum now, raffie, such beutiful,eroticsm at its best, someone i say, must be the catalyst of such raw passion |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Awwwwwwwwww, this is precious, sweet friend, this made me smile as your love is destined to swoon to your loving vows! (big hugggsssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Raphael, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OH WOW!!!! Speechless here! ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
for no one... Hey, I'm nobody, does that count? |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
thanks loner glad you did Thanks and you rock to S.E.A Thanks Bluesy my favourite ritual Dixie keep it there actually, you got it No catalyst mishy, vivid imagination for now Thanks Noah appreciate it Enchantress thanks and hugs back You always count Kacy |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
Keep writing like this and "no one" will find you!!! Excellent! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Sandpiper very sweet of you to say Dixie |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I'm suddenly thirsty Mxx Oh, you speak to me in riddles |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
i think maria is missing you today LOL mmm....got enough for both of us? LMAO lovely |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
i seem to be thristy my self lol ARCTIC WIND |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Oh how I miss Raph. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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