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Aenimal
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0 posted 2003-02-05 11:45 PM


Solemn vows in eyes lock
oaths whispered on nape of neck
The slow descent to bended knee
to speak in tongues devine
Hands braced upon the altar
as lips press to chalice
to drink of sweetest wine

In worship of you

© Copyright 2003 raphael giuffrida - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-05 11:47 PM


I really like this a lot

Cold hands means a warm heart

SEA
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with you
2 posted 2003-02-05 11:59 PM


No one...now I'm no one.....humph.... kidding...but really wowsers! this rocks!
BluesSerenade
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3 posted 2003-02-06 01:22 AM


The slow descent to bended knee
to speak in tongues devine.

That's love for ya!

Nice take on the ritual Raph~

passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-02-06 02:42 AM


well, there goes my mind in the gutter again...sorry...very passionate writing!
inkedgoddess
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5 posted 2003-02-06 07:10 AM


for no one
oh, cum now, raffie,
such beutiful,eroticsm at its best,
someone i say, must be the catalyst of such
raw passion

Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2003-02-06 05:00 PM




(sigh) Awwwwwwwwww, this is precious, sweet friend, this made me smile as your love is destined to swoon to your loving vows! (big hugggsssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Raphael, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
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7 posted 2003-02-06 05:04 PM


OH WOW!!!!
Speechless here!
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Midnitesun
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Gaia
8 posted 2003-02-06 07:20 PM


for no one...
Hey, I'm nobody, does that count?

Aenimal
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9 posted 2003-02-06 09:54 PM


thanks loner glad you did

Thanks and you rock to S.E.A

Thanks Bluesy my favourite ritual

Dixie keep it there actually, you got it

No catalyst mishy, vivid imagination for now

Thanks Noah appreciate it

Enchantress thanks and hugs back

You always count Kacy

Sandpiper
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10 posted 2003-02-08 05:31 AM


Keep writing like this and "no one" will find you!!!  Excellent!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

passing shadows
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11 posted 2003-02-09 03:31 AM



Aenimal
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12 posted 2003-02-09 03:51 AM


Sandpiper very sweet of you to say

Dixie

Dark Angel
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13 posted 2004-11-03 12:42 PM


I'm suddenly thirsty

Mxx

Oh, you speak to me in riddles
and you speak to me in rhymes
My body aches to breathe your breath
Your words keep me alive
~Sarah McLachlan~

muted
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14 posted 2004-11-03 12:57 PM


i think maria is missing you today LOL
mmm....got enough for both of us?
LMAO

lovely

Artic Wind
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15 posted 2007-10-28 11:34 AM


i seem to be thristy my self lol

ARCTIC WIND

Susan Caldwell
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16 posted 2007-10-28 08:41 PM


Oh how I miss Raph.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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