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Open Poetry #24
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DragonFang
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since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
0 posted 2003-02-05 11:19 PM

The words sound hollow
As they roll off the apstate tongue
"You should go" I say
Though I want you to stay

I know it's for the best
Unhappyness is all I've brought
But I don't want to let go
And I want to say so

But if I say stay
Then things will stay the same way
And we'll both be sad
We'll both stay feeling bad

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the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-02-05 11:21 PM

Awesome poem

Cold hands means a warm heart
Black Swan
Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165
on the moon
2 posted 2003-02-06 04:09 PM

painfully honest. i too have felt this way on many occassions. stay strong, it will get better i promise ! ~Talia
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