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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2003-02-05 09:14 PM



This thrill fairy dusted from the skies surround me
As you season to my favor spices flavor happily
Tasted in a gleeful smile finger tip into full lip
Dance in cares so meager, as I eagerly await the dip

Cinnamon to sift upon my fantasies about you
Softly shared from ear to ear as only you and I do
Tucked within your pocket hidden from the wintry cold
Ballerina Prima Vera dressed in red and blushed behold

As you tell about a spell of weather in it’s drenching
To be told forever bold of thirst in need of quenching
Thrilled by this unending kiss upon your lips redeeming
Dance in cares so meager, as the truth to hush un-seeming

This, the real of all that vain attempts to hold at bay
As you season to my favor, spices flavor tears away
Free to falter, yet un-alter all the joy you give to me
Stirring reason, in an easing of the only man I see

Copyright Kkh 2/5/03

© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
cinnamongirl
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1 posted 2003-02-05 09:16 PM


I so love this- love is a spicy, flavorful, delicious thing that is so meant to be savored... and makes life taste like heaven.

Thank you!

Sandpiper
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2 posted 2003-02-06 06:31 AM


Yummmmmmmmmmmmm...enjoyed!!!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

regards2you
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3 posted 2003-02-06 10:01 AM




Very creative. Just too many favorite lines to quote. It is delicious!


Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2003-02-06 05:23 PM




(smiles) Oh Kathleen, I just love the delicious spicy feel of this, sweet friend, don't forget the nice warm Caramel Mocchiato with that! (kiss on cheek) I just love the recipes you whip up, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
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5 posted 2003-02-06 05:24 PM


Made me smile

Cold hands means a warm heart

seven_conscious
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6 posted 2003-02-06 05:43 PM


made me smile, too!     "Tasted in a gleeful smile finger tip into full lip
Dance in cares so meager, as I eagerly await the dip"  loved this line!

Bill Charles
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7 posted 2003-02-06 07:38 PM


ThisDiamond - would you like coffe cake with tea, coffee, or ????

BC

scorpio
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right...there
8 posted 2003-02-06 07:42 PM


Wonderfully flavoured write....deliciously composed...

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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9 posted 2003-02-06 07:45 PM


Mmm...Yummy....have to go find a chocolate bar! LOL.
Well done Kathleen.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

carol
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10 posted 2003-02-07 12:38 PM


This is sweet loved it
garysgirl
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11 posted 2003-02-07 12:41 PM


Love is delicious, isn't it, Kathleen?
This sounds like a good recipe...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

vlraynes
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12 posted 2003-02-08 12:52 PM



Kathleen~
I REALLY like this piece.
Very nicely penned.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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