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the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-02-05 11:23 AM


This is from my Boyfriend's viewpoint or whatever you call it. LOL
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I want to marry
My girlfriend of almost 2 years
Only problem is
Where I live
There is not enough jobs
To be found
To get one

I must find a job
Before I marry her
I have been looking ever since
I meet her

I still live at home
With my parents
Who get on my nerves so
God if I could only find a job
I could get out of this hell hole

My parents are always mean
I am online
With my girlfriend
From Florida
And they always pull me away
Which I hate so much

That is the only disadvantage
Of being Canadian
The only way I can afford to
Talk to my angel from Florida
Is on the internet
But my parents
Always ruin it

I want to marry my angel from Florida
That is why I got to find a job
And keep my parents
From interfereing
With my true happiness

So until I am ready
To marry my angel
She already told me
She would wait on me

Cold hands means a warm heart

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BlueEyes
Member
since 2002-08-30
Posts 152
TX, USA
1 posted 2003-02-05 11:26 AM


That was really sweet! If it's meant to be, it will be, no matter how long it takes!!

BlueEyes

garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
2 posted 2003-02-05 11:36 AM


Julie, those long distance relationships
can be hard, can't they? I know. But, if both of you want to hold on and make it work until you can be together, it will. My Love and I have been in love for over four years.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2003-02-05 11:38 AM


the_loner_23
I guess all we have to do is wait, enjoyed.

HopeS
Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia
4 posted 2003-02-05 11:41 AM


I agree with the others , all you can both do is wait , besides true love does not always run smooth
Hope

ThunderMage
Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
5 posted 2003-02-05 05:00 PM


I found an angel the day I met you Julie.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
6 posted 2003-02-05 09:58 PM


Smiling at you. TD
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