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A Different Breeze
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A Different Breeze |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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A Different Breeze The breeze was blowing in a different way A colder air had changed the passing day And whispered words - “deceit surrounds your name” Though eyes saw light and dark to be the same Unaltered was perspective of the trust That with the blink of eye had turned to dust The window to my heart was open wide Exposing the unthinkable inside Though I was there to watch our spirits grow I was the last to cry - the last to know Elizabeth Santos [This message has been edited by Nan (02-03-2003 08:26 AM).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is an exquisitely written bittersweet tale, my friend...  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very well done...in telling bittersweet.. I enjoyed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth< Your ability as a writer has added shaft to the arrow and without feathers it flies. Sy |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Of dear friend, this is touching enough without knowing where the words are. I miss you dear friend and am looking forward to seeing you  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Elizabeth...a hand extended in quiet understanding... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
SOmetimes a different breeze is nothing more than hot air..you deserve better, dear lady.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Elizabeth...this just aches. Big hugs dear lady. ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Elizabeth, this is so sadly expressed, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you in hope all is alright and now all this is behind you! (big hugggsssssss) This is powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Dear Liz: You continually amaze me with your spectacular poems. I am so sorry I am unable to join you at the end of the month. It would have been so much fun to meet you and giggle and have a great visit. Nan has promised we can come another time. Hugs, Marti 'I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars.' |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
(((HUGS))) Very well expressed, Elizabeth. Shattered trust is never easy to get over. |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
Yes... bittersweet and lovely... such strength in learning from such experiences... Thank you for a beautiful write. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Liz, I don't know how I missed this, but I'm glad I saw it this time around. I totally relate to this, since I had someone, in the past, cause my trust in them to shatter, too. It doesn't feel good at all, either.... Hugs to you...  [This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-05-2003 10:18 PM).] |
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