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Ericc
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0 posted 2003-02-05 08:25 AM




               Turn to me,
               Turn -
               Soft
               With a kiss
               That hangs for just
               A moment longer
               After parting,
               Let my mind,my heart,
               My soul,
               Trace the curve of your lips.
               Then turn to me
               Once
               More.

© Copyright 2003 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2003-02-05 08:37 AM



You, Sir, are an incurable romantic,
and we intend to keep you that way...


BlueEyes
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2 posted 2003-02-05 10:46 AM


Once again....your words left me speachless..
Are there really guys out there that think/feel this way? Wow.

BlueEyes

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3 posted 2003-02-05 10:48 AM




(sigh) This is soooooooo beautifully romantic, sweet friend, your love is destined to always turn to face the smile and sunshine of your heart and will forever be blessed to have you! (smiles) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2003-02-05 10:59 AM


Ericc
Irresistible, enjoyed.

the_loner_23
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5 posted 2003-02-05 11:03 AM


This is so romantic. I really like it

Cold hands means a warm heart

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2003-02-05 11:26 AM


I don't even have to read your writing anymore..
Just see your name and *sigh*...lol.
Excellent...perfectly beautiful write.
~Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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