my friend (in 25 words or less)

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Open Poetry #24

my friend (in 25 words or less)

Lisann
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since 2001-01-31

Posts 350

0 posted 2003-02-05 08:17 AM

  You couldn't possibly be more beautiful
  Than you are within my eyes,
  You are the true essence of beauty
  A slendor undenied.

have you ever met someone that literally takes your
breath away........their presence in your life makes the whole world a brighter place......now.....you've met my dearest friend.

[This message has been edited by Lisann (02-05-2003 09:32 AM).]

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2003-02-05 09:15 AM

You are the true essence of beauty
A slendour undenied.
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someone inspires lovely things in your pen...
yes...have had my breath taken away...it makes for a wonderful muse doesnt it

Well done poetess Lisa

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

2 posted 2003-02-05 09:17 AM

Yes, you described my best friend.
Do you mean splendor? ck. my spelling, too.

This captured well what a best friend/special person is like.

Enjoyed it greatly.

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

[This message has been edited by regards2you (02-05-2003 10:09 AM).]

Lisann
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since 2001-01-31

Posts 350

3 posted 2003-02-05 02:09 PM

thanks regards2you.......you're right there is no u in splendor. Us canadians put a u in everything else i automatically put a u in it. LOL.

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2003-02-05 10:01 PM

Beautifully captured, Lisann ... the person who inspired this, is a fortunate and true friend, indeed.

Best wishes,
/Kit

carol
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since 2003-01-25

Posts 624
Florida USA

5 posted 2003-02-05 11:47 PM

yes you described a couple of my best friends

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

6 posted 2003-02-06 12:54 PM

love is beauty,
and the love between friends makes an astounding beauty of that friend.
Love this.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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7 posted 2003-02-06 03:01 AM

very nice

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