Open Poetry #24 |
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Why I Write Here..... |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA ![]() |
If I were writing poetry for class I would expect to get some kind of grade And possibly, I would or would not pass Depending on the effort I had made. If I were writing verse to win a prize I'd pay attention to each dot and dash No error would escape my watchful eyes And maybe I would win a little cash. But I am simply writing here to friends Kind people here that I have come to know And whether I am good or not depends On what I have to say and not the flow. So if my poetry is not correct Small comments do not interest me because I'm writing for the people I respect Who judge me for my heart and not the flaws. ![]() |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Nicely done Deer... but it would have been better if you had rhymed like you usually do. ![]() good points in this...and I feel much the same, in many regards |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Balladeer - good to go. Like it muchly... BC |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Touche, Ron... ![]() ![]() [This message has been edited by Balladeer (12-19-2002 08:19 PM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Deer...we are fortunate to call you friend, and every poem, every time (even when you're being really mean to Toe) you write with heart and wit and spirit. ![]() |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Your poetry is correct my Deer In every way you penned it It's not because I am your friend But from my heart I meant it ![]() Like scattered leaves...my words will flow [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (12-19-2002 08:23 PM).] |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Well Balladeer, I always thought you were flawless. And your poetry was and is perfect. You would definitely get an "A+" from me. I enjoy reading your poetry. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Your heart and your poetry are flawless. No one can dispute that. I think we all have our own reasons for writing and posting here. The comfortable feeling of sitting on a sofa listening to my friends recite their poetry is all I ask for - and that's the feeling I get at PiP. ![]() |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read ![]() |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Balladeer: It has been a while since I read the deeper you...Have always held your talent in high regard...pales to the man. ThisDiamond |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
After all of the above comments...WATTT MOH CANS A MAN SEZ???? Nicely said Michael... But you are still the 'deer of PiP!!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautifully said 'Deer. We are all indeed among friends here. ~Hugs~ ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Give me 5! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Michael ![]() |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hear Hear! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I haven't read a bad one yet, Michael. You've got heart and flow! Love ya! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Well said Balladeer!!!! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
And that, my 'Deer, is why you are so deeply loved. ![]() ![]() "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Very well said...and always good points to keep in mind. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Laney Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 85Illinois |
Balladeer--I have not read a poem of yours that I do not like!! There should be no worries if you are good or bad. Your definately good! Two thumbs up!! ![]() ![]() --Alana |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
And what a heart you have, except when dealing with old Toe than it's downright black lol |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Balladeer - I enjoy all of your poetry. This write is honest and warm. Very nice. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
what do they say, every bad boy has a soft side........or every good boy has a hard side.......i dont know what do they say,,,,,,,but.... sweet.......... |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ah Michael ... beautifully said, sweet poet. It's been a long time since I've written on the spur of the moment ... but you have a way of bringing out my words through yours. I loved this treasure. ![]() Perhaps that's why I can simply title this response back to you ... Why I Read Here When I recline before this glowing screen, And gaze upon the words and phrases there, I drift to where my poet friends have been, And through their vision, read each word with care. I seek the images they draw to mind, Immerse myself in all they have to say, Draw strength from the emotions that I find, Enveloped in the lessons they portray. A laugh, a frown, a smile or even tear, Will often surface as I take it in, From love to loss to happiness and fear, My mind is shaped by all absorbed within. On days I need to know that there is hope, Beyond realities within my world, Each poet's heart gives me a means to cope, Through every heartfelt line that is unfurled. ![]() Thank you for these ideas whirling about in my mind tonight ![]() Best wishes and big hugs, /Kit |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
As always, I enjoy your wonderful words and thus, deem this a keeper! You're one of the reasons why I still post at Passions and I have always respected your talent and am proud to call you 'friend.' You've made the grade, A+ all the way! BUT!, you do have one teensy weensy flaw M'deer - you like me don't ya?! ![]() ![]() ![]() Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound...or a smiling mouth" ~Kahlil Gibran~ [This message has been edited by Honeybee (12-19-2002 11:41 PM).] |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
People like you make this place even better than it already is. ![]() |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
We need no more proof of how special this place really is than these responses. Occasonally we will have someone come by and let us know that our poetry is not up to their standards. It reminds me of the "not seeing the forest for the trees" syndrome. They are unable to see the intangibles. We are not here to meet anyone's standards. We are here to write, to form friendships, to find a kind or friendly ear when needed, to share whatever little pleasure or even pain life deals us, to have a few laughs...these are the intangibles. I've never seen a friendlier or more supportive group of people. We welcome everyone, regardless of race, religion, nationality or level of poetic expertise. We don't pretend to be anything we are not. I've seen people post poems about how "lousy" we are, make threads in the Alley about how we "suck", spend their time with unconstructive criticism of our poetry and all I feel is a sadness for them...because they are either unable or unwilling to recognize the excellent intangibles of our little corner of the world. Don't ever change....I'm proud to be a part of such a wonderful group of people. Great response, Kit! I feel exactly the same ![]() |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
'deer, Inspiration begats inspiration. And it isn't just Kit you inspire. Such warm sentiments made my day. ![]() If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you said it Michael, that's why I'm here too. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) And we all love you so much here because you are YOU, and that is what makes YOu special! (big hugggssssss) I for one think you are a marvelous writer, but even more importantly, a wonderful man and dearest friend, and I write for who I am and wouldn't change it for the world, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Balladeer, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Well Michael, I don't know if I should even reply to any more poems or post any more, since it seems I'm one of the main subjects being graded. But, I would like to say that I have really appreciated all of you fine friends and family I've met here. You have all made me feel very welcome, even though I'm certainly not a professional writer. All I am is myself and you have all accepted me as that. Your poem is exactly how I feel, too. I thank you and every other member of this family of friends for accepting me the way you have and making me feel like I'm one of you. Thank you, Michael...... ![]() ~Ethel....garysgirl~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Michael.........yeppers....... and we ![]() |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Voices on the Web a Vision, and a quest a sampling of love, brought by the very best ~ From a world of poets a wonderful lot, it's true, as there is magic in their words, and wisdom, and some views... To make this world a better place; a simple deed, you ask? Nay, not so simple, it took months, but all accomplished a little task... and we came as one, but wrote of the multitudes... for change begins in the heart... and in one's attitude. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I know I try to share as much "pain" with Balladeer as is humanly possible...and, being the quiet, calm, collective and patient type as you all know, I don't let things bother me at all, I guess it's just that "shy" thing I have. (Now, I'm going to adult to post something about Balladeer, that should go on the alley but the profanity I'm going to express would lead the moderators to move it or delete it). Okay, it's Christmas, I'll be "Holy" till the first of the year....Naw....I won't be either....never mind, disregard this reply......Thanks....(besides, look up Balladeer's history here...you'll see why he really posts here)!!! |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Amen. *S* I'm not sure either carrots or sticks will work when someone's blind to the beauty here... but my respect for both you and your favorite target has skyrocketed this morning... You're a classy couple of guys. *S* SMOOCH! Don't be breathing that sigh of relief, Toe... it's only a Christmas smooch! LOL |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
’Deer dearest heart what can I say, your writing whether it be a quick scribble or a piece crafted word by word is awesome. Few writers possess the ability and the skill you do, even fewer can write the message they actually wish to convey. YOU DO, and you do yourself a disservice if you imagine for one instant that your writing is anything less than incredible. You write and the world pauses to hear, you write and the clouds that seem to hang heavy overhead part and the sun shines once more, you write and we are privileged to read you. Those who carp and criticise don’t understand one part of this place of refuge, inspiration, hopes dreams and most of all love. Truly you are a star and this is a blessing. I’m glad I return, it shows me why I must read you. Truly an absolute diamond I love it utterly utterly Why I Must Come Again In those days that have flown by I found my soul I heard its sigh I read the words that you wrote And realised that I could float In these pages shaded blue I found the words that I knew Would set me free, let me soar I read you and wanted more In the lines that you write here I found a path that led from fear The path I walk might be long But it is lit with your sweet song In your poems written with skill I found the way to climb my hill No truth I need more than this I found it lay in your poet’s kiss No matter what you think ‘Deer Your writing is so good and clear Each line is written well my friend May you write on till time does end Marsha ![]() ![]() ![]() Love and warm stuff As always Mushy ![]() ![]() Breathe through the heat of our desire Thy coolness and they balm Let sense be dumb let flesh retire Speak through the earthquake wind and fire [This message has been edited by Marsha (12-23-2002 09:04 AM).] |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Hehe, they booted you off the other site for being too kind? Seriously? Loved the thought you gifted in this. Most of us do stay here for the same reasons. Those who don't understand usually drift away, back into one of those other sites where nasty spit and slap are the name of the game. I enjoy honest critiques and healthy comraderie, that's why I stay at Pips. Thanks Michael. |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
I couldn't agree with this more! I love this place I just can't help but keep coming back.. the people here are the greatest and you explained that beautifully.. Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Balladeer, And that's the truth. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
I do love reading your poems and in my eyes they are always entertaining, amusing and so well written! ![]() Hugs and Happy Holidays Michael, Marti Let our love circle the world and |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
A place to call home... See you in the blue pages, 'Deer... |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
Why I Come Here.... This is the place which is meant to be A haven where minds & moods are set free We gather here with so much glee In the name of sharing a piece of prose/poetry Its known here that we agree to disagree And yet partake in this warmth filled potpourri I'm so glad for having found this family A place where I can be happy & be me.... Thank you, Balladeer it's all of you and your words/works that i come here for... ![]() |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
That's why we all love you ![]() ((hugs))) Charisma |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
PIP is my poetic home... no greater praise can I state. To Ron and all those who make it possible, you have my gratitude. Peace Sir Deer. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You are one of the best Balladeer...Top Gun...enjoyed...James |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Well said! I don't know where I'm running now, I'm just running on... ~ Jackson Browne |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
flaws???????? flaws?????? you have flaws? rofg haven't seen one yet.....*smile* course I haven't been looking for one either...your heart and your good poetry keep my eyes full ![]() happy holidays dear poet ![]() |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Your poetry always makes me smile ![]() I'm dangerous when left alone hehehe |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
hey, nice to know that i leave big comments... ![]() |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
He writes because he loves us one and all. He knows we sit with bated breath to hear His offerings of fine poetic call, ![]() ![]() |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Whew. . . . That takes a load off my mind... I see your on top as usual but that's natural for a Balladeer. lucky dale Speaking of ghosts, and after such an eternity. . .wouldn't you know, here comes mine again... |
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Fred Hobbs Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 329Tallahassee, Florida, US |
And you write to a LOT of people evidently. You've certainly earned your audience over the years Mike. Fine sentiments. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
To a lot, for a lot, with a big heart. That's him, Fred. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Well, I would point out your flaws gladly - if you had any. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Balladeer... Your words speak so clearly to many of us and echo our sentiments as well. With poets as yourself and others here, there is no place I would rather be. Have you got any secerts for curing writers block? I can't seem to write anything but replies lately...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" [This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (01-08-2003 02:17 AM).] |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Totally agree!! But time has changed your "VIEW". ![]() |
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