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Paintbrush
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Paintbrush |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
I would like a paintbrush For my face is of red flush I sought freedom from pains But I stare at memories' remains I need a paintbrush To paint over my life's journeys Remix the colours to engage new forays Into a world free of restless nights Find me a paintbrush I'll find the courage to erase Hatred from faces I'll bring joy and renewed smiles When I'm finished with the paintbrush You'll find a new me And a life that is meant to be Then I'll pass the paintbrush on to you Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 neat outlook |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Smiling at this paintbrush poetry. Is it a sable brush, to softly caress a tired face? |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
If only a mere painbrush would do I could erase the memory of you I enjoyed this very much. Susan |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Sy would surely lend his paintbrush, but he doesn't allow paint over a past... he may say, walk the avenues in the picture one more time, then turn it to the wall... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Ok, hand it over and I'll try to brush up, but I doubt it will change anything. Good poem Daniel~ |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Daniel, I like this. It really a good thought, if we could do it...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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