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Krawdad
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0 posted 2003-02-05 01:24 AM


               three cups
  
  
               The Witch upon herself
               has turned unruled
               and risks
               her wisdom wrath
               unfurled
               in flap-yap
               and flippant laugh

               This heeds no warning
               taught by mists
               leaves open doors
               long spiral twists

               See well her eyes of purple
               so no surprise
               dim signs arise
               and spike a spinal chill

               Collect them up
               and dust such luck
               new shadows fade
               in echoes    cluck

               If seeking self
               this hazards way
               beware
               one can not gift
               oneself . . . away
  
  
  
  

                                  ©   020403



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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2003-02-05 02:09 AM


absolutely beautiful, e.

and...you ever feel your chest just open up with so much more to say, even as you know words are inadequate?

smile.

Sure ya do...?

Much love to you and thank you for shuffling the deck.


passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2003-02-05 02:27 AM


great write...our serene one certainly does inspire greatness
inkedgoddess
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Ohio
3 posted 2003-02-05 01:45 PM


nice poem,
nice beard,
how long did it take to grow?

Decaflame
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4 posted 2003-02-05 01:46 PM



Sir...
she will smile...

Midnitesun
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Gaia
5 posted 2003-02-05 02:30 PM



Outstanding!

she shuffles decks,
casts spells of poetry...

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2003-02-05 04:26 PM


Wonderful...so good to see you posting again.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

GG
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Lost in thought
7 posted 2003-02-05 04:52 PM


I like this alot!

much enjoyed

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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