Open Poetry #24 |
Christmas in the Soddy, 1874 |
Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Christmas in the Soddy, 1874 That year of great extremes, both working hand to mouth Suffering blizzards from the north, and heat from the deep south She had counted chicken eggs, he had taken in the grain Both had prayed for clear skies, both had prayed for rain She had written of hard times, she wrote of good times too, She had penned all of their days, deep there in the woods While he worked so very hard, her hands were busy too When he finally sat to eat, she dished up hearty stew If she went out to hang the wash, he stood to stoke the fire She was his every and all, and he was her desire She had written of hard times, she wrote of good times too, Wrote of pheasant feathers found, deep there in the woods In June their plans were made for their Christmas day Pennies had been put aside, each had their little way She had sold her extra eggs, he swapped with neighbors too, Each stored away their pennies, with special gifts in view She had written of hard times, she wrote of good times too Wrote of the times they had lived, deep there in the woods Bits of thread, scraps of cloth, gifts that she would sew For each of their small children, for faces would then glow A dolly and a small wood horse, for he had carved away Oh yes, together, they looked forward to this Christmas Day She had written of hard times, she wrote of good times too Wrote of their hearts as they strived, deep there in the woods Then she took her writings, and sent them far away In exchange, a gift for him, on their Christmas Day And he had sold his carving, of an angel in high flight He looked forward to the gift he would give that very night After the Children had opened their gifts, When all was said and done Husband turned to Wife, each said, “Merry Christmas, my Dear One” For she had sold her writings, to purchase her love a knife He had sold his angel, a new pen for his dear wife Each had given of them selves, something the other held dear And the Magi smiled that night, for their love shone ever clear ~*~ ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 21 December 2001 slightly revised 16 December 2002 |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Such a beautiful tale spun to exemplify true love in the Christmas Spirit! I just loved the May your holidays be blessed (and thanks for your giving) Cher Poetry is: |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
*smiling through misty eyes here* Beautiful Christmas past story here Karilea. You know how I love this series! Yes...a keeper for sure! ~Hugs~ ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Here's to those simpler times of balance. Enjoyed |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea This is wonderful and so heart warming...the gifts of heart and the true meaning behind giving. Loved it! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
AAAWWW Karilea, I love it when you write these poem stories. Thank you.... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, you certainly choked me up with this, Dear One! The message--and your writing!--were soooo beautiful...... ~ smiling and sending you a warm hug, Linda |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
geez, what happened to those simpler times? |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
O'Henry in reverse... nicely told my friend |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Very nice poem.. Thank you for sharing... I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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