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Mistletoe Angel
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ROMEO
(A Candy Heart Poem)
By: Noah Eaton
2/16/02

I will be your romeo
You will always be my Juliet
I will be your Michelangelo
I will paint your skies with sonnets

Hop aboard my wild stallion
I'll take you over the rainbows
We'll make love throughout the seasons
I will shower you with wild roses



I'll wrap your heart with lace
You veil your face with lavender
My Juliet, lift your veil and let me kiss your face
You are a Rara Avis of an angel I'll love forever

I will always be your romeo
You will always be my Juliet
When I look into your jade eyes I know
We'll forever share lovers dreams not even Shakespeare could have ever dreamt...


















"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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1 posted 2003-02-04 07:49 PM


Beautiful Noah!
You are really getting into the Valentine's swing of things.
~Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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2 posted 2003-02-04 08:06 PM


Noah~
That was very good. Keep writing, you are a good poet. I hope you have a Juliet. I have my Romeo. You go boy.

Love,
Andrea

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3 posted 2003-02-04 08:11 PM


AAAAWWWWW Noah......
This is beautiful.......

Ethel  

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4 posted 2003-02-04 08:32 PM


Noah - you are really amazing, beautiful, just beautiful...

BC

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5 posted 2003-02-05 03:49 AM


One of my favorites Noah...how come Romeo gets Juliet?  I want her...James
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6 posted 2003-02-05 01:11 PM


A very sweet poem. I enjoyed reading it very much.

Don't settle for anyone less than your Juliet. There can be many fakes out in the world, but there is only one Juliet for you...

Blessings,

El Campeador


“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

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7 posted 2003-02-05 02:04 PM


loved it
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