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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

0 posted 2003-02-04 06:39 PM

Her heart was set in motion
to soft sweet refrain
she always loved him best
when dancing in the rain

Every little patter,
would somehow intensify
emotions from her soul
gathering in puddled sighs

Soaking through her senses
yes, that’s when she comes alive
water is sensuality,
where her passion derives

Thunder claps approval
oh she is a goddess, in saturation bliss
whispering, ‘baby, come dance with me
here, like this’.....

~SEA~

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2003-02-04 06:59 PM

You're the best.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

2 posted 2003-02-04 07:04 PM

Ok, but you gotta lead....

!!!!! Beautiful, classic SEA and her rain.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2003-02-04 07:19 PM

such a dance of words..always brightens my day... enjoyed this my friend.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-02-04 07:25 PM

Ah...perfect...Susan's rain.
Much enjoyed...and yes, I remember how much you love the rain.
~Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2003-02-04 08:40 PM

SEA - I love to dance, especially in the rain...

BC

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2003-02-04 08:43 PM

(smiles) Oh Susan, this is lovely, sweet friend, this made me smile as I love singing in the rain so much and you speak of such loves beauty in the downfall here! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-02-04 08:45 PM

Very pretty, Susan.
It fun to do a lot of things in the rain.....
like walking and stuff...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

poohbear19
Member

since 2003-02-02

Posts 94
Colorado, USA

8 posted 2003-02-04 08:56 PM

very pretty keep writing.

andrea

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

9 posted 2003-02-04 09:08 PM

Susan, this is beautiful. I have been real busy here lately. So, I haven't been able to read much here. But, I always love reading your poems.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

10 posted 2003-02-04 09:09 PM

That's my girl....

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

11 posted 2003-02-04 09:09 PM

enjoyed

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

12 posted 2003-02-04 10:18 PM

I awoke to rain early this morning but you weren't here to dance with me.

Yes, rain does have a sensual quality about it. Hugs, sweetie

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

13 posted 2003-02-04 10:33 PM

It's good to get wet, take whatever meaning you will from that. Great words

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

14 posted 2003-02-04 10:35 PM

Excellent. ThisDiamond

Lisann
Member

since 2001-01-31

Posts 350

15 posted 2003-02-04 10:49 PM

and i thought i was the only nutcase that loved to dance in the rain....lol. Good job Sue.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

16 posted 2003-02-04 11:16 PM

Lookin' good on ya Sea gal~

Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

17 posted 2003-02-05 07:32 AM

...could hear the music--enjoyed!!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

18 posted 2003-02-05 08:24 AM

Her heart was set in motion
to soft sweet refrain
she always loved him best
when dancing in the rain

Every little patter,
would somehow intensify
emotions from her soul
gathering in puddled sighs
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Have I ever told ya youre all wet

LOL

Ahhhh Sea-girlie...I've said this before but this rain kissed gem serves proof..the rain is such a sweet muse to your pen.
very cool poem!!!

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