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Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2003-02-04 05:16 PM

          And the stars
          still shine -
          Even when I close my eyes.

               Perhaps.

          Watch me tonight
          as I sleep,
          and tell me -
          What do you see?

          And the moon
          still shines -
          Even as I close my eyes.

          My blood is pulled
          as a tide.
          I rise with it.

          And the sun
          still shines -
          Even as I close my eyes.

          I know,
          I melt from its touch.

          And my love for you
          still shines -
          Even as I close my eyes.

          You
          are the stars,
          the moon,
          my sun.

          I close my eyes.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-02-04 05:19 PM

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-02-04 05:21 PM

I really liked this a lot

Cold hands means a warm heart

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-02-04 05:22 PM

Aww, Eric,
this is really pretty. I love it...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-02-04 05:22 PM

Even when
I close my eyes
the light that was
you
burns
against my lids.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2003-02-04 05:23 PM

Very nice!

BlueEyes
Member

since 2002-08-30

Posts 152
TX, USA

6 posted 2003-02-04 05:29 PM

(((sigh))) so beautiful & breath-taking..

You have a way with your words....

Much enjoyed...

BlueEyes

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2003-02-04 07:18 PM

(smiles) Oh Eric, this is lovely, sweet friend, this is gorgeous, this is bound to make your love swoon forever and ever! (big hugggsssssss) This is a true gem, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

cinnamongirl
Member

since 2003-02-02

Posts 217

8 posted 2003-02-04 09:13 PM

Aaaaahhh... the breath of God surely flows through you and your fingers. This is so beautiful; so powerful and delicate, filled with and laced with divine love... so much I could say... words just don't seem to exist to describe such love and beauty.

Thank you...

Love,
Moca

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2003-02-04 09:14 PM

liked it

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

10 posted 2003-02-04 10:11 PM

what a lovely read - thanks for sharing! warm regards, Roniece

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