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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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0 posted 2003-02-04 10:08 AM


Days get harder
Life gets worse
Your parents make decisions
For you when you don't want them to

They tell you when you can
And can't be online
You only get 1 hour
Sometimes more
Sometimes less
With your online girlfriend
And little sisters now

You feel alone
But you don't feel comfortable
Telling your parents
That you have made your own schedule
Of online time

Your 21 and unhappy
You miss talking to your
Girlfriend and Little sisters
When will you ever know your an adult?
You can speak up for yourself
If you don't

Mr. Lonely
You will be

Cold hands means a warm heart

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garysgirl
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1 posted 2003-02-04 02:15 PM


Julie, it's hard for some people to speak up for
themselves....especially if it's speaking up to
their parents. I had a very strict up-bringing
and my parents still would run my life if I let them.
Anyway, it's sweet of you to be concerned about your friend....

ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
2 posted 2003-02-04 04:36 PM


It sure is. Truer words couldn't be spoken. Don't worry though Julie. Everything will be fine.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
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3 posted 2003-02-04 05:05 PM


Very captivating.
Eric

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4 posted 2003-02-04 10:14 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Parents can indeed be so overprotective, but remember they aren't trying to make you suffocate, they just love you TOO much and then all you have to do is talk it over then they can see how lonely you can be and a compromise can be made! (sigh) My thoughts are with you both, sweet friend, I send angel hugs out, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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