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Open Poetry #24

Agony of Ashes

rm711
Member

since 2002-11-30

Posts 131
Wiltshire, England

0 posted 2003-02-04 03:42 PM

You manage to tell me
The only thing
I didn’t want to hear

And it’s amazing
How quickly I fall
From high
To buried so far down

Is it all worth it
To be so alone
Because from so high
The ground feels so solid

And my tears fall so hard
They pierce my skin
I’m crying blood
Bleeding from my soul

I’m so torn apart
I feel as if
I have no heart
That I’ve cried it all away

And as I lie
Buried in pain
I will burn
An agony of ashes

And my life
Will stream away.

small insignificant useless me

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2003-02-04 04:02 PM

Oh, this is incredibly sad, Rosie.
Be a Phoenix.

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

2 posted 2003-02-04 04:42 PM

Yes this is a very sad piece

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2003-02-04 04:48 PM

Inspite of your apparent pain, you still managed to write such a very gripping poem. I believe that Midnitesun had a wonderful suggestion: "be a phoenix"

Rise up from the ashes and forge a new life for yourself! Remember, "...and this too shall pass!"

Warm hugs,
EA

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