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*Star*
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0 posted 2003-02-04 02:48 PM



1/19/03

deep inside
i can feel                                                your heart beating

your hand
in mine
feels so right
like its meant
to be

on top
of me
our arms
intertwined
holding you close
to me

no need
for words
i know still
that you feel
what i do

knowing for sure
no question
no doubt
that with you and i
it is true

time stands still
there is nothing
in the world
but you
and me
together

i want this moment
to never end.

"Pardon me while I burst, into flames, I've had enough of this world, and its people's mindless games"

© Copyright 2003 Holly - All Rights Reserved
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-02-04 04:00 PM


A nice Valentine's poem for your partner.
Brad Majors
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2 posted 2003-02-04 04:43 PM


Very pretty! I hope your partner enjoys it!
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3 posted 2003-02-04 08:24 PM


Star,

This is a really beautiful poem. I hope your sweetheart enjoys it.

                              Dawn

cinnamongirl
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4 posted 2003-02-04 09:09 PM


A very sweet, passionate write.  

THANKS for sharing this!!!  Such love in your words... it's lovely!!

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