Open Poetry #24 |
When I am gone...reposted for a special friend |
Balladeer
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When I am gone and not around I want no mound to mark the ground where I lay still but let me be alive and well in memories of those I touched and knew me well my wish is such a place to dwell and let them feel me in the breeze that keys the move- ment of the trees and let me rest in Waldon's Pond then to the stars and far beyond I'll be a part of nature's plan inside the heart of every man and let them see me in the eyes of lovers' glee and baby's cries for I will be in all these things in rains that fall in birds that sing and this will be my epitaph 'he laughed to live and lived to laugh and laughed at life he never dropped until the day the laughter stopped' then I will rest a restful sleep I did my best now trust my keep to He above who shows the way to endless love for this I pray. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
AHA!!! Henry David Thoreau!!! (big hugggssssssss) I think he truly is a friend to every one of us, who continues to inspire us all in spirit as He may be free now but His poetry is eternal! God Bless You, sweet friend, you have done him great justice, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smile... this'n is special to me. maybe not for ME, but, then? maybe it was... *wink* |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your special friend is one lucky person... thank you Michael, for your compassion... for your caring. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Michael, this is so beautiful. I love it. Thank you for reposting it.. "Love makes the world go around" |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome write Cold hands means a warm heart |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Balladeer...I am almost speechless after reading this. I do believe you have also written my epitaph. Thanks for reposting this...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
The keys of you will always jingle, 'Deer, here in the blue walls... such an honor you've given to those that should always be remembered... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Extremely well done Michael.. Thank you for reposting. ~Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Very well done indeed Mr. Balladeer.....(I want to be buried in your front yard, just so you'll know I'm still lurking some damn place)......I don't remember this one...but I'm glad you reposted it.... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
ROFL @ Toe lurking... *G* My bet is that neither of you will ever forget the other. *S* This is beautiful, Bal... and I know that special friend appreciates it very much. *S* I know my last request won't be honored... even though I think resting between Daddy's daffodil bed and my pet graveyard would be perfect for me. *G* As to how I'm remembered... I just hope it's not with grimaces. *G* |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Michael, simply incredible! The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Sir Balladeer, an excellent write! I bow to you and yours. |
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Balladeer
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Noah...tes, it is rather Thoreauish, isn't it? Thanks for reading.. Serenity...if you want it to be for you...it is!! SUnshine..yes, she is and I wish her the best. Thank you! garysgirl..thanks for enjoying!! loner...I thank you. Dixie..your praise is always special... Paul...I think it could be an epitaph for many of us...I'm glad you enjoyed. Soleil Noir..may the blue walls keep standing!! Toerag...I'll be happy to bury you in my front yard....with your butt sticking out of the ground so I have a place to park my bicycle! Suthern gal..no grimaces...pity, perhaps, for all the years you wasted on that nogoodnik Toerag but you will be fondly remembered, for sure! Michael...I appreciate your response greatly.. Sir Andrew...always a pleasure to see your name! Peace to you and yours, good sir |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
BRAVO! I'll meet you some day in the breezes! Loved this Liz |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
’Deer dearest heart thank you muchly it does help to know that he is with HIM. Right now not a lot does help so I thank you for this beauty. All my dreams are wrapped in night right now, and I can’t think beyond the next hour, and it is at times like this that I value your friendship so very much. Thank you always for all you are Drape My Soul Drape my soul in swathe of night Keep me away from bright daylight Just let the world pass on by Leave me here wrapped in night’s sigh And when the moon passes o’re me Hide my face from her scrutiny She’ll see the tears that seep from eyes So red and sore from sorrows cries Dress me in the darkness of night Don’t sprinkle me with sweet sunlight I can’t bear its warming smile So leave me here for a short while I don’t want to see sunlight shine Or to feel that after all will be fine There is no light that feels quite true I want to share the dark with you Wrap me in the stark cold night Shut me away from soft starlight I don’t want to see moonlights face Or feel the touch of its pure trace Let shadows wrap all around me Let me walk these paths softly There’ll be no warmth while I’m here I’m washed in ice and sorrow’s tears Shadow’s hand keeps me in night Far from the warmth of healing light Marsha Thank you always Mushy Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This is beaufiful Michael. So appropriate for me to read it right now, as my father passed away Sunday. Thank you for posting it again. You can never win or lose |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
This is so pretty it reminds me of what my daddy would say |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
in Waldon's Pond then to the stars and far beyond I'll be a part of nature's plan inside the heart of every man Yes, you will. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very Beautiful Michael. Tracey hugs and warm thoughts for your loss and. Marsha, my friend...Needing Peace (reposted) Visited today... climbed the rolling green hill. Words prepared, when reaching you, were gone. Weakly, gliding shaking hand over strong gray marble, warmed by the sun's heat familiar names on either side, brought to mind happier times. Surrounded by ocean blue skies huge clouds floating above wondering... Can you see my tears? Can you share my pain? Can you hear my thoughts? Lifting my head, through damp eyes, noticed a tiny shell resting on another's edge. Examined the spiral within a spiral, once a life within a life... left behind in memory of someone "special". I have nothing to leave this time only sorrowful news and eternal love. Leaning, my body against for support now peacefulness entered my soul, stilled my shaking arresting my thoughts hoping the winds of today will dry my tears, becoming the soft breezes of my tomorrows My kissed fingers touched your etchings saying goodbye, before walking the paths of others, reaching out to touch their warmth in passing hoping they too, can feel mine knowing a part of my heart remains for all to share in eternal peace. M 9*2k He has eternal peace M...and knows he was loved...the greatest gift you could have shared. hugss Maureen |
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Balladeer
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That's a beautiful poem, Marsha, filled with the feelings you are experiencing now, I know. God bless.... Thank you, Maureen, for sharing that. I hadn't seen it and I'm glad I didn't miss it. Tracy...I am SO sorry to hear that, my friend. Seeing that smiling face across from me sipping a Corona and now thinking of what you must be going through makes me want to say something of comfort but I don't have the words...I am very sorry for your loss |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
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This is truly beautiful 'Deer, I'm adding it to my library. Maree |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
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heh adding now. [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (02-05-2003 03:54 PM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
What a gentle man you are. And how well your arms encircle those in need. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Kit McCallum
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Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a beautiful piece, Michael. Your cadence and rhyme are impeccable as always. My 'deer ... I have no doubt that the memories you have woven through your words, your stories, and your actions will surround all those you have touched forever and a day. I'm living proof of that. Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Michael my friend, other than to say that this is very touching and moving... and to say thank you.... I'm keeping it.. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is very good, Balladeer. Thank you for reposting this. |
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