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Cupid Beware |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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Reflective tape and bright red paint A target tattoo for the day of the saint I've purchased these things in the grip of my fear that near sighted cupid will miss me again this year I've stocked up on bullets took the rifle from shed if he misses me again The little bastard's dead [This message has been edited by Aenimal (02-03-2003 11:04 PM).] |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
raffi, dear, open your heart IRL, as you do here, she will [edited by moderator]...........soon................ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (02-03-2003 11:47 PM).] |
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PoetryIsLife 
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
What a damn good ending.  Damn good. Enjoyed the poem, aenimal. A good write.~Titus Es ist gut, daß das Leben die Toten studieren sollte. |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
ohhh..well..... too bad! cupid will GETCHA anyway hehehe boo hoo i don't have a valentine! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
ah...the anti-valentine! wrote a few of these meself! *chortle* and wink! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Mish IRL? And what did you write to get edited? Thank you Poetryislife gald you enjoyed it Goidless i hope so but I've got the weapon handy just in case Yes Karen the Anti-Valentine, I'm spearheading the coup of love from Hallmark Viva la revolucion!!! [This message has been edited by Aenimal (02-04-2003 12:08 AM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Now, Raph, just what are us "hopeless romantics" going to do with someone who is "anti-valentine" ?????? I wish I could make that little cupid fellow go over to Canada where you are and shoot an arrow of love between you and some cute girl (woman). THEN you wouldn't be wanting to write any "anti-valentine" poems anymore......  .. . Just wait, buddy, one of these days you're going to be so in love that most of your poetry is going to be romantic, mushy, lovey-dovey love poems!! HaHa!! . . (I hope you know that I'm just kidding with you.....of course, you do!)  Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-04-2003 01:40 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hehehe...you're too much...too damn cute! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Ethel lovey dovey never!! lol Why thanks Dixie  [This message has been edited by Aenimal (02-04-2003 04:34 PM).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
rofl.... get him!! seriously cute |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
LOLOL!!!! A classic!!!! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Just read this again and I'm shaking my head--kinda reminds me of that old office memo joke: "The beatings will continue until morale improves."   |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'The anti-valentine'...lmao. Think I'll wear camouflage and hide out in the cornfield! |
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BlueEyes Member
since 2002-08-30
Posts 152TX, USA |
Am I wrong here? I don't think this was anti-valentine... but rather you are expressing a longing to be struck by cupid's arrow? Seems like you DO want to fall helplessly in love??? BlueEyes |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Yes I agree, its about wanting to get hit. I loved this, of course I have the maturity level of a teenager so the cursing made me laugh! Susan |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
ROTFLMAO. If you need any help, I know how to hit that moving target! But since I'm basically a pacifist, I always seem to miss the mark, intentionally.  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hey everybody...  We all know that Raph is really wanting cupid to shoot him with that arrow. He just hasn't got hit just right yet. Let's all tell cupid to go after him... HeeHee . . BTW, Duncan, did I sense a touch of "Anti-Valentine" on your part, too. You know what that is around here right now. It's a BIG  . Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-05-2003 10:39 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a touch of humour always helps brought a smile this afternoon thanks M |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks SEA and i will Many thanks sandpiper!! Karen, love that memo Duncan you can help dig the trenches if you're game Dammit BlueEyes SPY!!SPY!! She's on to us!! Susan you reached teenager? wow I'm just reaching my terrible twos Kacy there are no pacisfists in foxholes..or something along those lines Ethel you and BlueEyes are co-conspirators eh? nakd if i brought a smile then some good will have come out of this terrible war |
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Lisann Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 350 |
LOL......sorry i couldn't help laughing. this is very cute. I hope you do find love this year....but go easy on cupid (poor little guy).......then again........with the husband he fixed me up with.....well that little fella has bad aim.....he missed my heart by a mile and got me in the ass....i ended up with a pain in my ass for life...LOL. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
See what i mean Lisa he's a menace..lol |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is too cute...had to bump it  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
 You're too kind Dixie |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
hehe I'm lovin' this. It's about time that lil punk got what he deserved. Of course this is a must for my library. You should re-post this around Valentines Day~ Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
heh heh heh. archieve surfing. it gets me every time insanity is not a crime |
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