Open Poetry #24 |
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Escort By The Heart |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
We dance an unconventional waltz The spans of said soak soothing salts As heartstrings strummed on wings Where you lead, there my heart sings We are calloused and weather weary In dessert before dinner ideal and theory By the current that pulls core to shore Where you lead, every moment adore We might squabble an uncertain tune Yet become hedge to edge willing soon In a mighty and powerful pull Where you lead, there I drink until full We are there for each other indeed There is never unnoticed a need And admire each moment aglow Where you lead, shall I happily go Copyright Kkh 2/3/03 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very nice Kathleen! This is wonderful read aloud. Much enjoyed tonight. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) This is lovely, sweet friend, this made me smile as love can always lead the way and follow the leader is what it feels! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderfully moving, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
TD...Your usual beautiful rhythm and rhyme, and sounds like a good thing called love. Enjoyed! |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kathleen, I enjoyed reading this. Almost missed it, too, it seems. I'm sure glad that I didn't miss it, though. It's really beautiful... ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a very sensitive write... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
I love this. It's simply the way it should be...love, trust, abandonment and surrender in all the most perfect ways. Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
nice and loving, without the pain and anxst of love, nice to read for a change of pace on here |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Beautiful poem, Kathaleen. Sounds to me like you're in love. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
We might squabble an uncertain tune Yet become hedge to edge willing soon In a mighty and powerful pull Give and take is like the salt of the earth and the truest measure of love~ You write with such a nice touch TD~ |
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