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Open Poetry #24

Falling with the Rain

rm711
Member

since 2002-11-30

Posts 131
Wiltshire, England

0 posted 2003-02-03 03:01 PM

Getting up
And going
I’m leaving
Not coming back

Don’t try to reason
I don’t want to know
I want to go
Far away

My tears cripple me
I’m weak with hurt
Dragging myself
Along this lonely road

It’s raining hard
And I don’t even know
Whether it’s the rain
Or my tears

But everything is blurry
It all seems so strange
Except for the pain
And the cold

The world is so surreal
But it’s something
I don’t want to have to feel
I know it all too well

And as the rain falls
I fall too
The sun went down
I did too.

small insignificant useless me

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

1 posted 2003-02-03 03:11 PM

mm.. enjoyed reading..... mm... m.... mmm..
yes yes yes..

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

2 posted 2003-02-03 03:22 PM

oh wow, I like this one alot!!
and I loveeee the rain.
this poem reminds me of one I write called Cadence of The Storm
I love taking walks at night when its raining, it helps me cry.
Did I mention I love this one? I do!

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2003-02-03 04:17 PM

Did you see me? I am on that lonely road as well..

I really liked this.

Susan

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