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Open Poetry #24

Tear Stained Face

Alicethruglass
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since 2001-06-19

Posts 368

0 posted 2003-02-03 02:00 PM

Tear Stained Face

This glass
reflects a tear stained face.
No words can take back the hurt,
no arms can subdue the sobs.
This glass is what's real
and its silver backing is wearing thin,
soon to reflect no more.

~A~

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

1 posted 2003-02-03 02:24 PM

I loved the vibrant imagry you painted this piece with.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2003-02-03 02:27 PM

ah.. but alice goes through the glass...and the silver backing has no hold on her...

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2003-02-03 02:37 PM

hello there.

I love reading your work. This one is sad, but the descrition of looking into the mirror...is aweseome.

~~I Love You~~

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

4 posted 2003-02-03 04:24 PM

Beautiful.
Eric

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

5 posted 2003-02-03 04:27 PM

I loved this!! Short and so full of meaning!

Susan

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