Open Poetry #24 |
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Black Sheep |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines ![]() |
Black Sheep He's always been the black sheep and today his color shown. Divisively he drew the line and tripped me, laying prone. I took his word, allowed its find to enter, scathe my heart. He's always been the black sheep and in this way stands apart. Naive am I to believe his words and whence they've come to be. He turned my day into a whorl, hammering into me. Upon himself he took the road to create my feel "alone". I spent the day reminding self his color he has shown. I've blocked him from my life for now and if the phone shall ring, if voice of his should reach my ear, a scolding I shall sing. Reminding him to stay "his place" and leave mine for my own. He's always been the black sheep and today his color shone. M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (02-03-2003 01:43 PM).] |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
He's always been the black sheep and today his color shone ... Beautifull... Hugs, Kelly The greatest thing u'll ever learn |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Very powerful. Eric |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
And I thought you were writing a poem about me.....I liked it anyway.. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
yes this is a powerful one. I look at myself right now wearing black pants a maroon sweater and some slick black shoes, I look as if I should be a businesswomen, but I'm heading to a doctor. Its hard to know when that black sheep is there to haunt or is really the most beautiful and unique. I like this. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
nahh, I was writing about my older brother who chose to unload all his jealousies upon me...making me feel as if I had nowhere to turn when I needed to..but it was all lies and ![]() M |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Alyssa, my older brother has always had the title "the black sheep" of the family and I have always defended him as I do everyone I care about. But as of today he is on his own... M |
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