Open Poetry #24 |
I'm Leaving Tonight |
babygrrl1887 Junior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 11Toronto, Canada |
I'M LEAVING TONIGHT It's now my turn to go Oh, how I'll miss you so I'm sorry that I have to leave But you have to understand that I need to be free Free of this life and it's horrible hold I have such a tale too long to be told I shall bring it with me wherever I go I have so many things left to show Please do not cry And please don't think this our last goodbye Never feel bad Just remember all the great times we had I'll never forget any of the times we had Whether they were good or whether they were bad I wish right now I made a wiser choice If I did I'd still hear your voice I wish I could feel your lips And oh how I crave one last kiss I regret doing what I did For turning and twisting off that lid And suddenly I'm thinking what I did was right You were never there to hold me tight I don't think I would've ever found love It's about as rare as a pure white dove I wish the thought of you would just go away But for some reason I want you here today Never give up in anything you do Even if you don't succeed somebody will always be proud of you Never think you've made a mistake And never let anybody make you think you're a phony or a fake I know sometimes it's hard And I know some people push too far But never let someone hurt you so bad And never let anyone make you real sad I know sometimes it's tough But please understand things do get rough Don't fall in love too fast Just make sure it's going to last Remember I'll always love you And I swear I'll always keep an eye on everything you do And when life gets rough And you think you've had enough Remember I'm always here And just to rid yourself of all your tears I'm sorry I have to leave like this And I'm sorry all I have to give is one last kiss You were the love of my life But....I'm leaving tonight. -------------------------------- I'm sorry, it's probably very badly written, or at least the places where the lines are. I hope you all get my message though. Thank you for being so kind to me. ~~Love, Amy |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I know how this feels. Good write Cold hands means a warm heart |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is very sad to me. I hope you aren't experiencing this. "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Amy, this is perfect! I have felt htis way so many times in my life...but leaving does no good, at least by my own experience...prayers and hugs to you! [This message has been edited by passing shadows (02-02-2003 05:13 AM).] |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautifuly told. Eric |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very heartfelt Amy. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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