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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-02-03 11:53 AM

I do not ask your forgiveness
nor do I offer my own
I heard your voice, strong and proud
but the louder the voice the weaker the man
Words once held me, in sweet tongue of promise
enchantment to ears pricked for answers to questions loom
Until I'd found the right one to ask
and in the clear of smoke and break of mirrors
The illusions lay revealed
as did you my charlatan friend

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-02-03 11:54 AM

...the louder the voice the weaker the man...

how much truth
in this one line...

thank you.

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

2 posted 2003-02-03 11:56 AM

And this,
"and in the clear of smoke and break of mirrors
The illusions lay revealed
as did you, my charlatan friend"

Nice one.

Ed...

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2003-02-03 12:57 PM

yes..I picked the same lines as Ed...

nicely done.. I enjoyed

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-02-03 01:00 PM

how I can relate

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

5 posted 2003-02-03 03:23 PM

Thanks Sunshine and thank you for responding

Ed thanks for stopping in I appreciate it

Thanks Cpat glad you enjoyed it

A

and hug for Dixie

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2003-02-03 05:23 PM

Even shattered mirrors can reveal evasive illusions.
You ooze poetry, yanno?

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

7 posted 2003-02-03 08:48 PM

Kacy as long as that's all i ooze

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2003-02-04 11:57 PM

and in the clear of smoke and break of mirrors
The illusions lay revealed

Better to get with the picture
no matter how disillusioning it is!
(I guess)

This speaks to me!

Thank you sir~

carol
Senior Member

since 2003-01-25

Posts 624
Florida USA

9 posted 2003-02-05 12:01 PM

I liked this but it sure has a sad note to it

[This message has been edited by carol (02-05-2003 12:02 AM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2003-02-05 02:54 AM

mmmm, such a big warm hug! can I have another?

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

11 posted 2003-02-05 03:49 PM

Bluesy thank you kindly madame for the lovely reply

Carol i don't know if it's entirely sad, it's a discovery and then you move on, in this case wiser and maybe stronger down the line

Another and bigger

and hug for Dixie

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