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64 Colors Minus One |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
It’s an easy grey To get lost in With mist holding mid thirties. Yesterday’s warm Now chilled As Dakota winds Return. Simple To lose oneself Veiled in colors demise For no one sees The dull Aches Sorrows Hidden in sunless traipse Across dull browns For today It is Easy Grey the rest stay in a box |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~slight smile~ I like your words better than mine [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (02-03-2003 10:57 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
button up the sweater, Cap'n... it's coming your way... |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Hi Ron, I read this thrice, trying to decide whether this is just about the weather or whether i am supposed to infer something more (like apply this situation to my life or derive some insights on the poet's mind) and that is what i like about this piece.... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Ron, I am liking the replies this morning to your poetry as much as the poetry. WELL...not AS much....love your poetry and this is no exception and no reply can do it justice...(though Patrick sure did!!!) smiling still..... I echo Kaile's response, for, again someone said what I would have liked to and how I felt upon reading it. Enjoyed this a great deal. Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'Simple To lose oneself Veiled in colors demise For no one sees The dull Aches Sorrows Hidden in sunless traipse Across dull browns' I saw blue in the sky yesterday for what felt like the first time in years...lol. You can have the gray! |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
oh gosh, did you ever hit it perfect with this one....it is gray here today as well...peaked at my muse as well, but haven't put it to paper |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I loved this from the title on. *S* Of course, it's more a case of losing all the prettier colors and being left only with grey in the box for me (but my cats help *G*) Hope your skies turn sunnier soon. *S* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 awesome! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
No blacks.. no whites... no array of hues... Just easy grey.. Geesh - A day too late for the groundhog too... Nice Write, Cap'n... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Enjoyed this Captain... Gray here as well..and damp.. somehow I think 'damp' is gray. Love the title too...good stuff! ~Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) I've always wondered if gray is really a color, to me it is always more of a complexion when the colors self-destruct on such a day such as this! (big hugggssssss) This is very well-said, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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