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Crossing Miles
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Crossing Miles |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Crossing Miles ~*~ Primary she comes to me two-dimensionally, in visual delight, accenting reds by yellows in golds, a blue twinkle of sparkling delight blinking at me hello the gift of her is held lightly this is me this is where I live this is me, thinking of you, my friend she is kindred to a heart’s beat in primary colors ~ I know we would meld in minds’ eye, for I am her background ~*~ Secondary The leaves still skip, for there has been no rain and the tease of snow that did not fall won’t chain back the melody of a leaf in laughter… the weather goes to the north and the south of us, leaving the legendary hole of our native Indian area visibly saying this is how it is… as the saga of invisible holes lives on… we are bared and naked of leaves and translucent of color… all is beige day gray and some of us are too soon begging for an early spring… winter solstice, just hours away gave me last night’s moon which left me wanting early early hours begged me come, come, look… fullest moon loomed o’erhead casting cottonwood shadows of come hither and follow the sprite, my eyes tracing the lines of where would we go thoughts, and the leaves rustled in the legends of old… ~*~ Primary Secondary is the background, then, for primary color as she would bring them, eternal youth in smile, brilliantine in touch, sensual, perhaps, in twist of word to make it stand against the backdrop of all that is, all that was. Sometimes I believe she feels we were parted at birth, because we sometimes touch each other so… through our poetry. She is primary, which is good, as I would not understand, otherwise, for a flower girl needs to know her colors. Just as a background of secondary, all in neutral, is needed, to set them off. ~*~ For our flower girl. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I am keeping this one. But you already know that. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
primary and secondary but both with vital roles to play and so intertwined that one becomes the other. Sunshine I love what you did with this. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Kari.......she will love this. Absolutely stunning work hon. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Secondary is the background, then, for primary color as she would bring them, eternal youth in smile, brilliantine in touch, sensual, perhaps, in twist of word to make it stand against the backdrop of all that is, all that was. Sometimes I believe she feels we were parted at birth, because we sometimes touch each other so… through our poetry. across the miles indeed.... enjoyed this my friend... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh, our flower girl is going to be so pleased with this! And...I'm keeping it too! Lovely, lovely write Karilea. ~Hugs~ ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
A masterpiece!!  Pen how you truly feel... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
very creative,heartfelt, and just terrific use of words.. |
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christian Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 331 |
this was creative, and thoughtful. i like 'she comes to me two dimensionally' .. thats inviting. managed to keep my attention--which is a pretty hard task sometimes. it made me feel dimensions,  but, i enjoyed it. thanks for the write. **** [*****] -chris. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Karilea~ This is absolutely gorgeous and is definately one of my favorites from you. Our flower girl is going to adore this.  Hugs to you, my friend,  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (12-19-2002 05:15 PM).] |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Well done, good read. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dear Karilea You have left me speechless with this touching connection you have made to friendship with such beautiful words. I am honored to be gifted by such a lovely spirit voice from you. Thank you, my friend and much love! |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
After all your poetry I've read, it still is simply amazing to me. Thank you........  "Love makes the world go around" |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The leaves still skip, for there has been no rain and the tease of snow that did not fall won’t chain back the melody of a leaf in laughter… the weather goes to the north and the south of us, leaving the legendary hole of our native Indian area visibly saying this is how it is… as the saga of invisible holes lives on… we are bared and naked of leaves and translucent of color… all is beige day gray and some of us are too soon begging for an early spring… winter solstice, just hours away gave me last night’s moon which left me wanting early early hours begged me come, come, look… fullest moon loomed o’erhead casting cottonwood shadows of come hither and follow the sprite, my eyes tracing the lines of where would we go thoughts, and the leaves rustled in the legends of old… ============================== could this be any more stunning? superb write of imagery... but tis the heart of intend that makes this inspire so special. Beautiful Kari...you touched the warm with this one...and then so did we  Will the wind remember the names it has blown in the past? |
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