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love for storms
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love for storms |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Always just a moment's pause barometric pressure drops. Watch the pets curl up their tails-- a birdless sky before the squall. Silences tell creepy tales oh you know much more is said spaces inbetween the words fill in the blanks of fear. Gauging body language now-- check the eyes for veils-- observe the man become cartoon and burn the bridge a self-lampoon from brain to tongue words burn the sun as I hold my ears... I've lost my love for storms. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
NEVER! never lost, just hidden...maybe resting...but never really lost [This message has been edited by passing shadows (02-03-2003 04:35 AM).] |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Hey! What would ya do without the thunder and rage? Oh! yeah, it could be a little more peaceful, huh? Hugs,witch ~yeti |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
I love every line of this layered poem. Enjoyed greatly... last line made me smile....in 'personal' understanding.... Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
some storms are more destructive than others.. enjoyed... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, Understandable but not practical. LOL Good write. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Hugs |
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