Open Poetry #24 |
Sister |
carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
All the time on the road we rush to ride. Like we are trying to roll along with the tide. And at the end of a very long hot day. I think of all the things i didn't take the time to say. So sister this i want to make real clear. To my heart you are so very dear. I know at times the waves seams to be a lot rougher. But remember that is what makes us so much tougher. And we so often think of our troubles. Not realizing thats what made our love grow double. I want you to know no one could ever take your place. It always makes me happy to see your smiling face. So since i don't always take the time to say. I am always thinking of you every day. So dear sister i thought i would write this line. To let you know you are special and i love you all the time. |
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christian Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 331 |
youre shaggy poem made me want a dog, this poem made me want a sister. damn you. :smirk: |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Carol, I'm sure that your sister loves this poem. It's a very good way to tell her that you love her. "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very special indeed! nice write |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
christian, yes sisters are awful good to have. |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
passing shadows, thank you, i sure do love my sister |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Ethel, yea i am sure my sister will like this. |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
I just posted one with the same title in the Corner Pub - how lucky we are to have Super Sisters. Very nicely said. I be me BUT who does me be? |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Rita, this is wonderful, sweet friend, your sister loves you so uch and I am sure thinks of you all the time too as you are her sister too! (sigh) God Bless You Both, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rita, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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*Star* Junior Member
since 2003-02-03
Posts 32Iowa |
Anybody would be a very lucky person to have a sister like you |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Spirit, yes we are lucky to have lovely sisters i will have to go to there and read yours. |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Noah, thanks yes i know she loves me too we have shared so much |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Star, i feel like i am the lucky one i am 2 years older but she been by my side a lot. |
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