Speak - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

cinnamongirl
Member

since 2003-02-02

Posts 217

0 posted 2003-02-02 03:56 PM

I love to hear you speak;
Your words gently
Caress each word and
Wrap them up in soft
Silk tones.
I love the silence in between
And what secrets you
Share with me in the
Breath that flows
Like sunlight through
My open windows.
I love to feel the
Vibration and the lilt
Of your sweet and
Peaceful voice,
Touching places within
Where I have never been.
And I love what you
Hide for only my
Soul to feel inside
Dancing unseen like
A spirit on
The wind that sings
Of love eternal
In the space
Between.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-02-02 04:00 PM

Lovely...very lovely.
A belated welcome to Passions...
I hope you enjoy your stay as there is a lot
to read and much to enjoy here on the blue pages.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2003-02-02 04:05 PM

(smiles) This is lovely, sweet friend, yay, Welcome to Passions, dearest friend, may you sing like a sparrow and release the fortissimo of life deep within your throat! May love always fill that space between, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

3 posted 2003-02-02 04:14 PM

A story....beautifuly told.
Eric

jade dragoness
Member

since 2003-01-25

Posts 76

4 posted 2003-02-02 04:19 PM

nice flow of emotions

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2003-02-02 05:13 PM

cinnamongirl - I must agree, a very lovely write. Just to hear those words is sometimes magical...

BC

Peter J Marcroft
Member

since 2003-02-02

Posts 265
York, England

6 posted 2003-02-02 05:16 PM

Good use of Antithesis (or at least I hope that is right term) nice to see so many lines of the verse that could form one long sentence

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-02-02 05:20 PM

This is beautiful. I love these romantic poems...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

8 posted 2003-02-02 06:48 PM

Several favorite lines, all well woven.
Smiles from ThisDiamond

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2003-02-03 01:28 AM

wow, how'd I miss you? anyhow, welcome!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

10 posted 2003-02-03 12:54 PM

How beautiful! Welcome to the passionate blue pages, where words and feelings tumble down the page, taking your heart and mind along for a glorious ride.
Enjoy!

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.