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Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2003-02-02 03:51 PM

Your fingers tell the story
Of David...aching from a
Stones release.

   I know this touch.

As you trace an ocean
Down my back -
And unafraid...unafraid,
I part as a wave to the grace
Of your hand.

   I know this touch.

From tears that
Long -
To know the taste of your caress.

They remember your touch
And cry for only you.

   I know this touch.

Your fingers tell my story.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2003-02-02 03:52 PM

A quiet gasp at this, swept up in a memory.

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (02-02-2003 03:53 PM).]

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-02-02 03:57 PM

Eric...When I read you...I must remember to breathe.
This is beautiful...wonderful images come to mind.

~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-02-02 03:59 PM

(sigh) Oh Eric, this is lovely, sweet friend, this made me cry as I long to touch my dream girl like this and love her forever! (big hugggssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

4 posted 2003-02-02 04:00 PM

Beautiful!!

Charisma

cinnamongirl
Member

since 2003-02-02

Posts 217

5 posted 2003-02-02 04:00 PM

And what a beautiful story those fingers tell. Such a quiet passion within these peaceful words...

Thank you...

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2003-02-02 04:10 PM

What a delicate touch
you bring...!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2003-02-02 06:54 PM

Ahhh...this shivered through me...
Truly a most delicate rose. ThisDiamond

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2003-02-02 06:56 PM

Eric, this reminds me of the poem my Gary wrote for me titled "Fingertips".
Brought good memories...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Peter J Marcroft
Member

since 2003-02-02

Posts 265
York, England

9 posted 2003-02-02 06:58 PM

very nice imagery and rhythm, good stuff

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

10 posted 2003-02-02 08:09 PM

Sensual images created in this write...beautiful..

believe in what your heart feels...

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

11 posted 2003-02-02 09:17 PM

Another beautiful write. You are very sensual in your gentleness.

poohbear19
Member

since 2003-02-02

Posts 94
Colorado, USA

12 posted 2003-02-02 09:41 PM

This is a very good poem. and what a good story those fingers tell. Thank you so much for sharing this lovely poem.

Andrea

seven_conscious
Junior Member

since 2003-01-27

Posts 33

13 posted 2003-02-02 11:20 PM

pretty : )

christian
Member

since 2002-12-18

Posts 331

14 posted 2003-02-02 11:25 PM

damn. that was breathtaking.

:catching breath:

-chris.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

15 posted 2003-02-03 01:07 AM

what a scene! I love this!

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