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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-02-02 03:50 AM


Different?

he said
“you’re beautiful”
and I
just laughed
not thinking
it myself
but then
I wondered
does being
in love
make you
look different


"It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly."


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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-02-02 04:57 AM


I think it does, yes

*and you are beautiful*

[This message has been edited by passing shadows (02-02-2003 04:58 AM).]

garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-02-02 10:14 AM


Oh yes, I believe when a person is "in love", they have a certain glow about them...and when the one who is in love looks at their LOVE, they are BOTH  beautiful to each other.
.
.
Does that sound like a "hopeless romantic", or does it sound like I'm "in love"...maybe some of both?

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Ericc
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3 posted 2003-02-02 03:48 PM


Being in love lets you see...what has always been there.
I loved your words!
Eric

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2003-02-03 02:55 AM


Enjoyed...James
dhicks03
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5 posted 2003-02-03 03:01 AM


very clever, and yes it does.
Cpat Hair
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6 posted 2003-02-03 07:43 AM


does it?

enjoyed this... as usual.


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