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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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rhythms native underneath a quivering of leaf betrayed he tapped of me in restlessness. This book filled my palm just so... it curved the way I did. I was the middle line of white seperating old highway squinting in the glare of brights headlights blind to driving gloves I smelled the scent and drove. tired beckoning just ahead "We're almost there." Something wired reckoning-- my nose in twitch of air begging me "Are we there yet?" unfurling black top of despair... "This is the last-chance destiny." Trees in charcoal--moss erased-- too fast a glance to make the sketch... urgency between my thighs longing muscled in disguise-- I rest behind the silhouette mountains on horizon's edge-- illusion of low-hanging cloud. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well after three reads and three different visions... I  to you... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
 ...A grand ride indeed... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
nowhehre near there yet, still so far to go , thanks for the timely reminder |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Trees in charcoal--moss erased-- too fast a glance to make the sketch... I fear I ride my horse to death-- urgency between my thighs longing muscled in disguise-- I rest behind the silhouette mountains on horizon's edge-- illusion of low-hanging cloud. ================================= Oh..I must disagree....you "made the sketch" you drew it in verse..colored it in rhyme.   |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
caught under the wheels of an 18 wheeler |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Smiling, riding along with this one, almost there. More than one interpretatiln within this...as usual.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, Could not be written better.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good write, I enjoyed it |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks for reading--and holding my hand a bit, while I "get my land legs"  and I swear, sometimes I don't get my own innuendo until the next day!  And I just realized something else--ya'll deserve a big thank you from me--as of today? You all have been tolerating my insanity for three years!!!  thank you. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
serenity blaze - h'mmmm, I must wonder where this place bed. I believe I've been there... BC |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!!! Much enjoyed the read K. Congrats also on your anniversary here at Passions. ~Hugs & Smiles~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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