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dhicks03
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since 2002-12-26
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Missouri,USA

0 posted 2003-02-01 04:57 PM



Oh my my
Mysterious Lady in ice
Your sugar and spice
And everything nice
What may I offer you today?


Stained glass smoke and mirrors
that dwell on the past?
Know it's true
I walk in blue
Hearts that bend to far
Become encumbered with scars
As pain...blends with laughter


Someday, Lady Snow
Where ever you may go
Pray,
Dashing and deserving
Walks with you,
Gently caressing your hand
And you at that moment will understand
Time waited for no one
Not even I
Lest I try
To collect scattered pieces of me
Amiss on the lonely nights
Fallen...like shattered glass


Blue eyed ladies
Perhaps and maybes
Have been the drugs of choice
And the voice
That once would croon
To harvest moons
Fell silent
It's lyric
Like a dancer
Having forgotten the steps
Lies bleeding...on the floor


No, 'M'lady
You deserve
So much more
Your gentle winds
Will one day
Fly with one that soars
And make your dreams
Mix with your passion
A love so kind
That cross' the fine line
Where wisdom meets contentment
Enchanted passion
Will dance with you both...forevermore

© Copyright 2003 Dennis Hicks - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2003-02-01 05:35 PM


Beautiful waterfall, down the page. ThisDiamond
Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2003-02-02 03:43 PM


Nice flow to this one, tumbling down the page, a fine line.
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2003-02-02 03:45 PM


This dances down the page beautifully
Well done!
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-02-03 01:52 AM


just awesome...just perfect
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