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wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2003-02-01 01:46 PM


I hope I have a good mind
not to find...

Any more doors or wars
To open and shut
Unsheltered shores

Where the beggar
Doesn’t have his hand out
But if he does
Then that’s what it’s about

I hope this song doesn’t
Have any rhythm
I hope this song doesn’t
Have any rhythm
Cuz I aint got it in me
To shock the system

I just want to piss them
I just want to piss them

Maybe its
How I got
Pushed up from the daises
Pushed in from the daises
Carried along with the crazies
I hope I’ll make it with the daises
Dancing with the crazies

Somehow I hope it’s worth it
Kissing the detergent
It’s the only way to get clean man
The only way to go unseen man

Those poppies
Popularized
Growing through the pavement
Somehow I hope I’ll save them
But I can’t sleep anymore
Without a daydream

I sampled my sound
From a sonic boom
And I’ll never again
leave my room

Or travel further than the radius
of my mind

I shut all the doors
and swallowed the key
the radar is directed at me


[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (02-01-2003 02:27 PM).]

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Dr Pepper Freak
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1 posted 2003-02-01 02:41 PM


KABOOM!  Direct hit with this one!  Most gracious applause to you on this!

It's not the load that breaks you down, it's the way you carry it. ~ Lena Horne

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2003-02-02 03:46 PM


Well I heard this one, loud and clear.
way out, walt

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2003-02-03 01:50 AM


agree totally! great stuff though a definate thinker
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